From 70c2b473128e1aa4cf79f3155347788bd2d17e07 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Bishop Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 14:56:45 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Add a change log section to each document. TLS still needs details. --- draft-ietf-quic-http.md | 16 ++++++++++++++++ draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md | 10 ++++++++++ draft-ietf-quic-tls.md | 9 +++++++++ draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 10 ++++++++++ 4 files changed, 45 insertions(+) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-http.md b/draft-ietf-quic-http.md index a9cdf50004..00e3e9863d 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-http.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-http.md @@ -809,3 +809,19 @@ This document adds one new entry to the "HTTP/2 Frame Type" registry defined in # Contributors The original authors of this specification were Robbie Shade and Mike Warres. + +# Change Log + +> **RFC Editor's Note:** Please remove this section prior to publication of a +> final version of this document. + +## Since draft-ietf-quic-http-00: + +- Changed "HTTP/2-over-QUIC" to "HTTP/QUIC" throughout + +- Changed from using HTTP/2 framing within Stream 3 to new framing format and + two-stream-per-request model + +- Adopted SETTINGS format from draft-bishop-httpbis-extended-settings-01 + +- Reworked SETTINGS_ACK to account for indeterminate inter-stream order. diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index 90030415d5..1ab5c3741f 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -442,3 +442,13 @@ This document has no IANA actions. Yet. --- back # Acknowledgments + + +# Change Log + +> **RFC Editor's Note:** Please remove this section prior to publication of a +> final version of this document. + +## Since draft-ietf-quic-recovery-00: + +None yet. diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md b/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md index 03a076a59c..4fb1b60124 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md @@ -1246,3 +1246,12 @@ Ryan Hamilton was originally an author of this specification. This document has benefited from input from Dragana Damjanovic, Christian Huitema, Jana Iyengar, Adam Langley, Roberto Peon, Eric Rescorla, Ian Swett, and many others. + +# Change Log + +> **RFC Editor's Note:** Please remove this section prior to publication of a +> final version of this document. + +## Since draft-ietf-quic-tls-00: + +Too many for me to list effectively; **Martin**, please fill this in. diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index 711b941034..ed030e7ddf 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -1934,3 +1934,13 @@ Siddharth Vijayakrishnan, and Assar Westerlund. This document has benefited immensely from various private discussions and public ones on the quic@ietf.org and proto-quic@chromium.org mailing lists. Our thanks to all. + + +# Change Log + +> **RFC Editor's Note:** Please remove this section prior to publication of a +> final version of this document. + +## Since draft-ietf-quic-transport-00: + +- Replaced DIVERSIFICATION_NONCE flag with KEY_PHASE flag From 64eba5356f8acad78df8a2f978390374f5e155fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Bishop Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 15:13:21 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] Include last pre-WG draft in change log --- draft-ietf-quic-http.md | 6 ++++++ draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md | 8 ++++++++ draft-ietf-quic-tls.md | 10 ++++++++++ draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 4 ++++ 4 files changed, 28 insertions(+) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-http.md b/draft-ietf-quic-http.md index 00e3e9863d..ca5660d3a4 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-http.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-http.md @@ -825,3 +825,9 @@ The original authors of this specification were Robbie Shade and Mike Warres. - Adopted SETTINGS format from draft-bishop-httpbis-extended-settings-01 - Reworked SETTINGS_ACK to account for indeterminate inter-stream order. + +## Since draft-shade-quic-http2-mapping-00: + +- Adopted as base for draft-ietf-quic-http. + +- Updated authors/editors list. diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index 1ab5c3741f..090788f345 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -452,3 +452,11 @@ This document has no IANA actions. Yet. ## Since draft-ietf-quic-recovery-00: None yet. + +## Since draft-iyengar-quic-loss-recovery-01: + +- Adopted as base for draft-ietf-quic-recovery. + +- Updated authors/editors list. + +- Added table of contents. diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md b/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md index 4fb1b60124..22af9ece95 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md @@ -1255,3 +1255,13 @@ many others. ## Since draft-ietf-quic-tls-00: Too many for me to list effectively; **Martin**, please fill this in. + +## Since draft-thomson-quic-tls-01: + +- Adopted as base for draft-ietf-quic-tls. + +- Updated authors/editors list. + +- Added status note. + +- More; **Martin**? diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index ed030e7ddf..11d30350ad 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -1944,3 +1944,7 @@ thanks to all. ## Since draft-ietf-quic-transport-00: - Replaced DIVERSIFICATION_NONCE flag with KEY_PHASE flag + +- Added IANA Considerations section. + +- Moved Contributors and Acknowledgments to appendices. From 986eefa86d7062e162d39f6ab0d50c2c0efb0cf9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Bishop Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 15:17:38 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Missed one doc's ancestor --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 6 ++++++ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index 11d30350ad..53a45f4455 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -1945,6 +1945,12 @@ thanks to all. - Replaced DIVERSIFICATION_NONCE flag with KEY_PHASE flag +## Since draft-hamilton-quic-transport-protocol-01: + +- Adopted as base for draft-ietf-quic-tls. + +- Updated authors/editors list. + - Added IANA Considerations section. - Moved Contributors and Acknowledgments to appendices. From 611003b05cce43ea4caf69fe1de41b38e8704033 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 11:02:59 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Adding TLS changelog details --- draft-ietf-quic-tls.md | 10 +++++++--- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md b/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md index 22af9ece95..a33cef3a62 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-tls.md @@ -1254,7 +1254,13 @@ many others. ## Since draft-ietf-quic-tls-00: -Too many for me to list effectively; **Martin**, please fill this in. +- Changed bit used to signal key phase. + +- Updated key phase markings during the handshake. + +- Added TLS interface requirements section. + +- Moved to use of TLS exporters for key derivation. ## Since draft-thomson-quic-tls-01: @@ -1263,5 +1269,3 @@ Too many for me to list effectively; **Martin**, please fill this in. - Updated authors/editors list. - Added status note. - -- More; **Martin**?