From e395bb1ad3d3fb80675ea6c8236749a884259122 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Bishop Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 13:42:15 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Fixing what appear to be mangled error code descriptions --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 31 ++++++++++++++++--------------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index 711b941034..5ae1cfb396 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -1778,8 +1778,9 @@ TODO: Discuss error handling beyond just listing error codes. * 0x4b: QUIC_FAILED_TO_SERIALIZE_PACKET. (Closed because we failed to serialize a packet.) -* 0x55: QUIC_TOO_MANY_RTOS. (QUIC timed out after too many RTOs.) x1c: -QUIC_HANDSHAKE_FAILED. (Crypto errors.Hanshake failed.) +* 0x55: QUIC_TOO_MANY_RTOS. (QUIC timed out after too many RTOs.) + +* 0x1c: QUIC_HANDSHAKE_FAILED. (Crypto errors. Handshake failed.) * 0x1d: QUIC_CRYPTO_TAGS_OUT_OF_ORDER. (Handshake message contained out of order tags.) @@ -1806,12 +1807,12 @@ QUIC_HANDSHAKE_FAILED. (Crypto errors.Hanshake failed.) with a mandatory parameter missing.) * 0x24: QUIC_CRYPTO_MESSAGE_PARAMETER_NO_OVERLAP. (A crypto message was - received with a parameter that has no overlapwith the local parameter.) + received with a parameter that has no overlap with the local parameter.) * 0x25: QUIC_CRYPTO_MESSAGE_INDEX_NOT_FOUND. (A crypto message was received - that contained a parameter with too fewvalues.) + that contained a parameter with too few values.) -* 0x5e: QUIC_UNSUPPORTED_PROOF_DEMAND. (A demand for an unsupport proof type +* 0x5e: QUIC_UNSUPPORTED_PROOF_DEMAND. (A demand for an unsupported proof type was received.) * 0x26: QUIC_CRYPTO_INTERNAL_ERROR. (An internal error occured in crypto @@ -1824,7 +1825,7 @@ QUIC_HANDSHAKE_FAILED. (Crypto errors.Hanshake failed.) resulted in a stateless reject.) * 0x28: QUIC_CRYPTO_NO_SUPPORT. (There was no intersection between the crypto - primitives supported by thepeer and ourselves.) + primitives supported by the peer and ourselves.) * 0x29: QUIC_CRYPTO_TOO_MANY_REJECTS. (The server rejected our client hello messages too many times.) @@ -1836,17 +1837,17 @@ QUIC_HANDSHAKE_FAILED. (Crypto errors.Hanshake failed.) duplicate tag.) * 0x2c: QUIC_CRYPTO_ENCRYPTION_LEVEL_INCORRECT. (A crypto message was received - with the wrong encryption level (i.e. itshould have been encrypted but was + with the wrong encryption level (i.e. it should have been encrypted but was not.)) * 0x2d: QUIC_CRYPTO_SERVER_CONFIG_EXPIRED. (The server config for a server has expired.) -* 0x35: QUIC_CRYPTO_SYMMETRIC_KEY_SETUP_FAILED. (We failed to setup the +* 0x35: QUIC_CRYPTO_SYMMETRIC_KEY_SETUP_FAILED. (We failed to set up the symmetric keys for a connection.) * 0x36: QUIC_CRYPTO_MESSAGE_WHILE_VALIDATING_CLIENT_HELLO. (A handshake message - arrived, but we are still validating theprevious handshake message.) + arrived, but we are still validating the previous handshake message.) * 0x41: QUIC_CRYPTO_UPDATE_BEFORE_HANDSHAKE_COMPLETE. (A server config update arrived before the handshake is complete.) @@ -1854,30 +1855,30 @@ QUIC_HANDSHAKE_FAILED. (Crypto errors.Hanshake failed.) * 0x5a: QUIC_CRYPTO_CHLO_TOO_LARGE. (CHLO cannot fit in one packet.) * 0x37: QUIC_VERSION_NEGOTIATION_MISMATCH. (This connection involved a version - negotiation which appears to have beentampered with.) + negotiation which appears to have been tampered with.) * 0x50: QUIC_IP_ADDRESS_CHANGED. (IP address changed causing connection close.) * 0x51: QUIC_CONNECTION_MIGRATION_NO_MIGRATABLE_STREAMS. (Connection migration - errors.Network changed, but connection had no migratable streams.) + errors. Network changed, but connection had no migratable streams.) * 0x52: QUIC_CONNECTION_MIGRATION_TOO_MANY_CHANGES. (Connection changed networks too many times.) * 0x53: QUIC_CONNECTION_MIGRATION_NO_NEW_NETWORK. (Connection migration was - attempted, but there was no new network tomigrate to.) + attempted, but there was no new network to migrate to.) * 0x54: QUIC_CONNECTION_MIGRATION_NON_MIGRATABLE_STREAM. (Network changed, but connection had one or more non-migratable streams.) * 0x5d: QUIC_TOO_MANY_FRAME_GAPS. (Stream frames arrived too discontiguously so - that stream sequencer buffermaintains too many gaps.) + that stream sequencer buffer maintains too many gaps.) * 0x5f: QUIC_STREAM_SEQUENCER_INVALID_STATE. (Sequencer buffer gets into weird state where continuing read/write will lead to crash.) -* 0x60: QUIC_TOO_MANY_SESSIONS_ON_SERVER. (Connection closed because of server - hits max number of sessions allowed. +* 0x60: QUIC_TOO_MANY_SESSIONS_ON_SERVER. (Connection closed because server + hit max number of sessions allowed. # Security and Privacy Considerations