From 3fee2873545dcc2cae20f070b86f844dae6a5558 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: David Schinazi Date: Wed, 5 Oct 2022 15:51:24 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] minor tweaks --- draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md b/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md index 581e14e..bb693ba 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ Version Negotiation packet that contains incorrect connection ID fields; see Upon receiving the Version Negotiation packet, the client SHALL search for a version it supports in the list provided by the server. If it doesn't find one, it SHALL abort the connection attempt. Otherwise, it SHALL select a mutually -supported version and sends a new first flight with that version - this version +supported version and send a new first flight with that version - this version is now the negotiated version. The new first flight will allow the endpoints to establish a connection using @@ -536,7 +536,7 @@ future versions SHOULD attempt to design their new version such that commonly deployed versions are compatible with it. QUIC version 1 defines multiple features which are not documented in the QUIC -invariants. Since at the time of writing QUIC version 1 is widely deployed, +invariants. Since, at the time of writing, QUIC version 1 is widely deployed, this section discusses considerations for future versions to help with compatibility with QUIC version 1.