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 The 3 jobs will go into the scheduled queue and will wait there until they're due. Then, 10 minutes after, the first two jobs will be enqueued and the second one most likely will be blocked because the first one will be running first. Then, assuming the jobs are fast and finish in a few seconds, when the third job is due, it'll be enqueued normally.
 
-Normally scheduled jobs are enqueued in batches, but with concurrency controls, jobs need to be enqueued one by one. This has an impact on performance, similarly to the impact of concurrency controls in bulk enqueuing. Read below for more details. I'd generally advise against mixing concurrency controls with waiting/scheduling in the future.
+Normally scheduled jobs are enqueued in batches, but with concurrency controls, jobs need to be enqueued one by one. This has an impact on performance, similarly to the impact of concurrency controls in bulk enqueuing. Read below for more details. We generally advise against mixing concurrency controls with waiting/scheduling in the future.
 
 ### Performance considerations
 
-Concurrency controls introduce significant overhead (blocked executions need to be created and promoted to ready, semaphores need to be created and updated) so you should consider carefully whether you need them. For throttling purposes, where you plan to have `limit` significantly larger than 1, I'd encourage relying on a limited number of workers per queue instead. For example:
+Concurrency controls introduce significant overhead (blocked executions need to be created and promoted to ready, semaphores need to be created and updated) so you should consider carefully whether you need them. For throttling purposes, where you plan to have `limit` significantly larger than 1, we encourage relying on a limited number of workers per queue instead. For example:
 
 ```ruby
 class ThrottledJob < ApplicationJob