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docs/announce/2013.09.md

@@ -37,10 +37,10 @@ ask on the <perl6-compiler@perl.org> mailing list, or ask on IRC
 
 The next release of Rakudo (#69), is scheduled for October 17, 2013.
 A list of the other planned release dates and code names for future
-releases is available in the "docs/release_guide.pod" file. In
-general, Rakudo development releases are scheduled to occur soon after
-each Parrot monthly release.  Parrot usually releases the third Tuesday
-of each month.
+releases is available in the "docs/release_guide.pod" file. A Rakudo
+development release occurs soon after each Parrot monthly release is
+scheduled to occur.  Parrot usually releases the third Tuesday of
+each month.
 
 On behalf of the development team, I encourage you to try the new release,
 to live life to its fullest, to cherish each moment, and to have fun.