From 0eb10f60e1dfb1399b96e2f4d7962a6a2b7ec391 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 20:44:11 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 01/12] network-installation.adoc : correct case character --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index a77ca8859..7e9f0645e 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -73,4 +73,4 @@ image::images/network-install-4.png[width="80%"] NOTE: More information can about using the Raspberry Pi Imager can be found in the section on xref:getting-started.adoc#installing-the-operating-system[installing your operating system]. -After installing the operating system onto your blank SD Card you will not longer see the network installation screen on boot. If you do want to run it, you just need to remove any bootable disks. You can re-insert them later when the Raspberry PI Imager is running. But take care not to overwrite any working disks that you want to keep! \ No newline at end of file +After installing the operating system onto your blank SD Card you will not longer see the network installation screen on boot. If you do want to run it, you just need to remove any bootable disks. You can re-insert them later when the Raspberry Pi Imager is running. But take care not to overwrite any working disks that you want to keep! \ No newline at end of file From c440ef915c28a9792245bcafbcf62e5891bf41aa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 20:46:26 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 02/12] network-installation.adoc : correct spelling on installation --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 7e9f0645e..57c1672f9 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ But how do you get the operating system onto your SD card if you don’t have an If you do not have another computer to run Raspberry Pi Imager you can start the application directly on a Raspberry Pi 4 or Raspberry Pi 400 by connecting it to the Internet with an Ethernet cable. This will allow you to install the operating system onto a **blank** SD Card directly from the network without using another computer. -IMPORTANT: Network installation is only supported on Raspberry Pi 4 and Raspberry Pi 400. Additionally, to avoid slowing down “normal boot,” the network instllation feature is only enabled if there’s no bootable media present, and you have xref:raspberry-pi.adoc#usb-mass-storage-boot[USB mass storage boot] in your xref:raspberry-pi.adoc#BOOT_ORDER[boot order]. +IMPORTANT: Network installation is only supported on Raspberry Pi 4 and Raspberry Pi 400. Additionally, to avoid slowing down “normal boot,” the network installation feature is only enabled if there’s no bootable media present, and you have xref:raspberry-pi.adoc#usb-mass-storage-boot[USB mass storage boot] in your xref:raspberry-pi.adoc#BOOT_ORDER[boot order]. === Updating to the BETA bootloader From ac2782026a3fb5f65e0838e5cf2faecc8b69df41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 20:51:25 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 03/12] network-installation.adoc : correct style guide --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 57c1672f9..bdaa85c1d 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ You will need a keyboard to make use of the network installation feature. While video::b1SYVpM9lto[youtube] -You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into the Raspberry Pi's SD Card slot. +You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into Raspberry Pi computers SD Card slot. NOTE: You should make sure there isn't a bootable SD Card, or USB drive, attached to your Raspberry Pi. From 8c75c9960329d06a9caf2c90e3683f6a13037e32 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 20:53:45 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 04/12] network-installation.adoc : correct style guide --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index bdaa85c1d..4eef81f4b 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ image::images/beta-bootloader-2.png[width="80%"] Afterwards, select your media and follow xref:getting-started.adoc#installing-the-operating-system[the normal instructions] to burn the updated bootloader to your SD Card. -When the SD Card has finished burning you should power off your Raspberry Pi and remove the existing SD Card and put it somewhere safe. Insert the card you just flashed with the Imager application into the Raspberry Pi and power it back on. The board LED will flash regularly, and the screen will go green to indicate that flashing the new beta bootloader was successful. +When the SD Card has finished burning you should power off your Raspberry Pi and remove the existing SD Card and put it somewhere safe. Insert the card you just flashed with the Imager application into Raspberry Pi computer and power it back on. The board LED will flash regularly, and the screen will go green to indicate that flashing the new beta bootloader was successful. [NOTE] ==== From 5cc66710eb0eff3933faf1855afa5cbe96db18a0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 20:55:28 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 05/12] network-installation.adoc : correct style guide --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 4eef81f4b..4d57c4ea6 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always it will first look for an SD Card, and the image::images/network-install-1.png[width="80%"] -In the background the Raspberry Pi is still looking for a bootable imagem, but you can now start a network installation by holding down the `SHIFT` key for 3 seconds. Confirm that you want to go ahead by pressing `SPACE`, and you will be prompted to connect your Raspberry Pi to the network with an Ethernet Cable. +In the background Raspberry Pi is still looking for a bootable imagem, but you can now start a network installation by holding down the `SHIFT` key for 3 seconds. Confirm that you want to go ahead by pressing `SPACE`, and you will be prompted to connect your Raspberry Pi to the network with an Ethernet Cable. image::images/network-install-2.png[width="80%"] From 83996cceef5e4c9088cd65782e5894c7fa0e3efc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 20:58:19 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 06/12] network-installation.adoc : add comma on words --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 4d57c4ea6..50b7f7f9a 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into Raspberry Pi computers SD Card s NOTE: You should make sure there isn't a bootable SD Card, or USB drive, attached to your Raspberry Pi. -Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However if you have a keyboard attached the Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. +Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always, it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However, if you have a keyboard attached the Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. image::images/network-install-1.png[width="80%"] From cc52f51e7e6b58f0b40218f869deb79b01c08102 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 21:08:32 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 07/12] network-installation.adoc : add comma and remove prepositions --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 50b7f7f9a..255315fc1 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into Raspberry Pi computers SD Card s NOTE: You should make sure there isn't a bootable SD Card, or USB drive, attached to your Raspberry Pi. -Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always, it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However, if you have a keyboard attached the Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. +Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always, it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However, if you have a keyboard attached, Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. image::images/network-install-1.png[width="80%"] From 4aadc5d1dc0736129372bf5dcaf4f716d4be5d1a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Wed, 9 Feb 2022 21:34:27 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 08/12] network-installation.adoc : update some correct sentence --- .../getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 255315fc1..2715febdf 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ WARNING: Installation of the beta bootloader should be fairly safe, but you shou The easiest way to update the bootloader on your Raspberry Pi 4 or 400 is by using the Raspberry Pi Imager, either running on your Raspberry Pi or another computer, to copy the required software onto an SD card. You’ll need a spare blank SD Card and, if you’re using a Raspberry Pi or another computer that doesn’t have an SD Card slot, a USB to SD Card dongle. -You should be aware that the SD Card you’re using to update your Raspberry Pi’s bootloader will be wiped of any existing data, so you shouldn’t use the SD Card you are currently using with your Raspberry Pi. +You should be aware that the SD Card you’re using to update your Raspberry Pi computers bootloader will be wiped of any existing data, so you shouldn’t use the SD Card you are currently using with your Raspberry Pi. In the Imager application, click on the “Choose OS” button and scroll down the “Operating System” list in the pop-up window and select “Misc utility images”, then select “Beta Test Bootloader.” @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ image::images/beta-bootloader-2.png[width="80%"] Afterwards, select your media and follow xref:getting-started.adoc#installing-the-operating-system[the normal instructions] to burn the updated bootloader to your SD Card. -When the SD Card has finished burning you should power off your Raspberry Pi and remove the existing SD Card and put it somewhere safe. Insert the card you just flashed with the Imager application into Raspberry Pi computer and power it back on. The board LED will flash regularly, and the screen will go green to indicate that flashing the new beta bootloader was successful. +When the SD Card has finished burning you should power off your Raspberry Pi and remove the existing SD Card and put it somewhere safe. Insert the card you just flashed with the Imager application into the Raspberry Pi computer and power it back on. The board LED will flash regularly, and the screen will go green to indicate that flashing the new beta bootloader was successful. [NOTE] ==== @@ -51,15 +51,15 @@ You will need a keyboard to make use of the network installation feature. While video::b1SYVpM9lto[youtube] -You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into Raspberry Pi computers SD Card slot. +You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into the Raspberry Pi computers SD Card slot. NOTE: You should make sure there isn't a bootable SD Card, or USB drive, attached to your Raspberry Pi. -Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always, it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However, if you have a keyboard attached, Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. +Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However, if you have a keyboard attached the Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. image::images/network-install-1.png[width="80%"] -In the background Raspberry Pi is still looking for a bootable imagem, but you can now start a network installation by holding down the `SHIFT` key for 3 seconds. Confirm that you want to go ahead by pressing `SPACE`, and you will be prompted to connect your Raspberry Pi to the network with an Ethernet Cable. +In the background the Raspberry Pi is still looking for a bootable imagem, but you can now start a network installation by holding down the `SHIFT` key for 3 seconds. Confirm that you want to go ahead by pressing `SPACE`, and you will be prompted to connect your Raspberry Pi to the network with an Ethernet Cable. image::images/network-install-2.png[width="80%"] @@ -73,4 +73,4 @@ image::images/network-install-4.png[width="80%"] NOTE: More information can about using the Raspberry Pi Imager can be found in the section on xref:getting-started.adoc#installing-the-operating-system[installing your operating system]. -After installing the operating system onto your blank SD Card you will not longer see the network installation screen on boot. If you do want to run it, you just need to remove any bootable disks. You can re-insert them later when the Raspberry Pi Imager is running. But take care not to overwrite any working disks that you want to keep! \ No newline at end of file +After installing the operating system onto your blank SD Card you will no longer see the network installation screen on boot. If you do want to run it, you just need to remove any bootable disks. You can re-insert them later when the Raspberry Pi Imager is running. But take care not to overwrite any working disks that you want to keep! \ No newline at end of file From d3eb2e7b33db9b1be1bd03eea0330f74e0119885 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Thu, 10 Feb 2022 08:04:37 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 09/12] network-installation.adoc : fixed some correct --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 2715febdf..847b9982b 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ WARNING: Installation of the beta bootloader should be fairly safe, but you shou The easiest way to update the bootloader on your Raspberry Pi 4 or 400 is by using the Raspberry Pi Imager, either running on your Raspberry Pi or another computer, to copy the required software onto an SD card. You’ll need a spare blank SD Card and, if you’re using a Raspberry Pi or another computer that doesn’t have an SD Card slot, a USB to SD Card dongle. -You should be aware that the SD Card you’re using to update your Raspberry Pi computers bootloader will be wiped of any existing data, so you shouldn’t use the SD Card you are currently using with your Raspberry Pi. +You should be aware that the SD Card you’re using to update your Raspberry Pi computer bootloader will be wiped of any existing data, so you shouldn’t use the SD Card you are currently using with your Raspberry Pi. In the Imager application, click on the “Choose OS” button and scroll down the “Operating System” list in the pop-up window and select “Misc utility images”, then select “Beta Test Bootloader.” @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ image::images/beta-bootloader-2.png[width="80%"] Afterwards, select your media and follow xref:getting-started.adoc#installing-the-operating-system[the normal instructions] to burn the updated bootloader to your SD Card. -When the SD Card has finished burning you should power off your Raspberry Pi and remove the existing SD Card and put it somewhere safe. Insert the card you just flashed with the Imager application into the Raspberry Pi computer and power it back on. The board LED will flash regularly, and the screen will go green to indicate that flashing the new beta bootloader was successful. +When the SD Card has finished burning you should power off your Raspberry Pi and remove the existing SD Card and put it somewhere safe. Insert the card you just flashed with the Imager application into the Raspberry Pi and power it back on. The board LED will flash regularly, and the screen will go green to indicate that flashing the new beta bootloader was successful. [NOTE] ==== @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ You will need a keyboard to make use of the network installation feature. While video::b1SYVpM9lto[youtube] -You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into the Raspberry Pi computers SD Card slot. +You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into the Raspberry Pi computer SD Card slot. NOTE: You should make sure there isn't a bootable SD Card, or USB drive, attached to your Raspberry Pi. From 0a06e55fc693636194b4469e106aefde2138886c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: RuffaloVM Date: Thu, 10 Feb 2022 09:18:51 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 10/12] network-installation.adoc : correct grammar --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 847b9982b..5f08b7c91 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -51,11 +51,11 @@ You will need a keyboard to make use of the network installation feature. While video::b1SYVpM9lto[youtube] -You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into the Raspberry Pi computer SD Card slot. +You should also insert a **blank** SD Card into the SD card slot of your Raspberry Pi. NOTE: You should make sure there isn't a bootable SD Card, or USB drive, attached to your Raspberry Pi. -Power on your Raspberry Pi. As always it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However, if you have a keyboard attached the Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. +Power on your the Raspberry Pi. As always it will first look for an SD Card, and then a USB drive, to find bootable media. However if you have a keyboard attached, the Raspberry Pi will now show the network installation screen. image::images/network-install-1.png[width="80%"] From ffd3c4733a9a01e2e1125a790f519b8de27a7e79 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alasdair Allan Date: Thu, 10 Feb 2022 17:31:01 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 11/12] Preposition removal --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index 5f08b7c91..b9a3e473e 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -73,4 +73,4 @@ image::images/network-install-4.png[width="80%"] NOTE: More information can about using the Raspberry Pi Imager can be found in the section on xref:getting-started.adoc#installing-the-operating-system[installing your operating system]. -After installing the operating system onto your blank SD Card you will no longer see the network installation screen on boot. If you do want to run it, you just need to remove any bootable disks. You can re-insert them later when the Raspberry Pi Imager is running. But take care not to overwrite any working disks that you want to keep! \ No newline at end of file +After installing the operating system onto your blank SD Card you will no longer see the network installation screen on boot. If you do want to run it, you just need to remove any bootable disks. You can re-insert them later when Raspberry Pi Imager is running. But take care not to overwrite any working disks that you want to keep! From 64d1cd829732f55680cf0784df5f1274fcdce6b3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alasdair Allan Date: Thu, 10 Feb 2022 17:31:40 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 12/12] Possesive --- .../computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc index b9a3e473e..d2b7b95b9 100644 --- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc +++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/getting-started/network-installation.adoc @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ WARNING: Installation of the beta bootloader should be fairly safe, but you shou The easiest way to update the bootloader on your Raspberry Pi 4 or 400 is by using the Raspberry Pi Imager, either running on your Raspberry Pi or another computer, to copy the required software onto an SD card. You’ll need a spare blank SD Card and, if you’re using a Raspberry Pi or another computer that doesn’t have an SD Card slot, a USB to SD Card dongle. -You should be aware that the SD Card you’re using to update your Raspberry Pi computer bootloader will be wiped of any existing data, so you shouldn’t use the SD Card you are currently using with your Raspberry Pi. +You should be aware that the SD Card you’re using to update your Raspberry Pi computer's bootloader will be wiped of any existing data, so you shouldn’t use the SD Card you are currently using with your Raspberry Pi. In the Imager application, click on the “Choose OS” button and scroll down the “Operating System” list in the pop-up window and select “Misc utility images”, then select “Beta Test Bootloader.”