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commit 17d20473ebeddbd5b8a6b1cae6f02752c08c0e09 1 parent fd36cf6
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@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ h1, h2, h3, h4 {
h1#title {
font-size: 50px;
- margin-top: 55px
+ margin-top: 55px;
}
h2#subtitle {
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}
h2#form {
- margin-bottom: -30px;
+ margin-bottom: -25px;
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<div class="container-fluid">
+
<center><h1 id="title">Bootstrapping Masterclass</h1></center>
<center><h2 id="subtitle">Start a software business.</h2></center>
+
<div id="content">
-<p>You are investing hundreds of hours into starting your software business. Make sure you don't screw up too much and you will succeed. You just need to avoid doing the wrong things, especially when you are starting, to have a profitable business.</p>
+<p>If you are serious about making money from your software business, read this email blog.</p>
-<p>Read this email blog to avoid making costly mistakes and turn your hardwork into profits.</p>
+<p>You are investing hundreds of hours into starting your software business. Make sure you don't screw up too much and you will profit from your hardwork. You just need to avoid costly mistakes that destroy bootstrapped businesses - especially when you're starting.</p>
-<p>You will have every resource you need to develop your web or mobile app and launch to paying customers. You will also learn how to effectively market online, get and keep more customers, and triple your revenue.</p>
+<p>This email blog provides you with every resource you need to develop your web or mobile app and launch to paying customers. You will also learn how to effectively market online, get and keep more customers, and triple your revenue.</p>
<center><form class="form-horizontal" action="https://www.getdrip.com/forms/4556847/submissions" method="post" target="_blank" data-drip-embedded-form="1419">
<h2 id="form" data-drip-attribute="headline">Start reading today.</h2>
<p data-drip-attribute="description"></p>
<div>
<p><label for="fields[first_name]"></label></p>
- <input class="input-lg" placeholder="Your first name" type="text" name="fields[first_name]" value="" />
+ <input class="input-lg" placeholder="First name" type="text" name="fields[first_name]" value="" />
<p><label for="fields[email]"></label></p>
<input class="input-lg" placeholder="Email (I'll never spam you.)" type="email" name="fields[email]" value="" />
</div><br>

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