From 787d356704e9cb638508d5e7ad2de6db21d57ce3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ganna Zhyrnova <112796922+gannazhyrnova@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Wed, 27 Mar 2024 16:48:48 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] migrate2rocky.md Grammar check --- docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md b/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md index d2f53c0d3f..7113936fa6 100644 --- a/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md +++ b/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md @@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ Then clone the rocky-tools repository with: git clone https://github.com/rocky-linux/rocky-tools.git ``` -Note: this method will download all of the scripts and files in the rocky-tools repository. +Note: This method will download all scripts and files from the Rocky Tools repository. ### The easy way This is probably the easiest way to obtain the script. You only need a suitable HTTP client (`curl`, `wget`, `lynx` and so on) installed on the server. -Assuming you have the `curl` utility installed, run this command to download the script into whatever directory you are using +Assuming you have the `curl` utility installed, run the following command to download the script into whatever directory you are using: !!! Note If you're running a 9.x system, add a 9 before the `.sh` @@ -84,11 +84,11 @@ Assuming you have the `curl` utility installed, run this command to download the curl https://raw.githubusercontent.com/rocky-linux/rocky-tools/main/migrate2rocky/migrate2rocky.sh -o migrate2rocky.sh ``` -That command will download the file straight to your server, and *only* the file you want. But again, security concerns suggest this is not necessarily the best practice, so keep that in mind. +That command will download the file to your server, and *only* the file you want. But again, security concerns suggest this is not necessarily the best practice, so keep that in mind. ## Running the script and installation -Use the `cd` command to switch to the directory where the script is, ensure the file is executable, and give the owner of the script file x permissions +Use the `cd` command to switch to the directory where the script is, ensure the file is executable, and give the owner of the script file x permissions. !!! Note In the below commands, if you're running a 9.x system, add a 9 before the `.sh` @@ -103,15 +103,15 @@ And now, at long last, run the script: ./migrate2rocky.sh -r ``` -That "-r" option tells the script to just go ahead and install everything. +That "-r" option tells the script to go ahead and install everything. If you have done everything right, your terminal window will look a bit like this: ![a successful script startup](images/migrate2rocky-convert-01.png) -Now, it will take the script a while to convert everything, depending on the actual machine, and the connection it has to the wider internet. +Now, the script will take a while to convert everything, depending on the actual machine and its connection to the wider internet. -If you see a **Complete!** message at the end, then everything is fine and you can restart the server. +If you see a **Complete!** message at the end, everything is fine, and you can restart the server. ![a successful OS migration message](images/migrate2rocky-convert-02.png) From 1735666c81793ad2d01d6f6a5b7e07be8040244e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: sspencerwire Date: Wed, 27 Mar 2024 11:49:39 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update migrate2rocky.md --- docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md b/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md index 7113936fa6..ce8c011b8f 100644 --- a/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md +++ b/docs/guides/migrate2rocky.md @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Then clone the rocky-tools repository with: git clone https://github.com/rocky-linux/rocky-tools.git ``` -Note: This method will download all scripts and files from the Rocky Tools repository. +Note: This method will download all scripts and files from the rocky-tools repository. ### The easy way