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But what if you want to see all the little settings, features, and configurations the GNOME developers have hidden? You can look up your current problem online and type in a command to change an obscure variable, or you can install `dconf Editor`.

`dconf Editor` is essentially a GNOME Settings app that has *everything*. In fact, it might remind you a little bit of the Windows Registry, and it *is* similar. However, it is more readable, it only covers GNOME functionality, and some of the software built for GNOME.
`dconf Editor` is a GNOME Settings app with *everything*. It might remind you a little bit of the Windows Registry, and it *is* similar. However, it is more readable; it only covers GNOME functionality, and some software is built for GNOME.
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`dconf Editor` is a GNOME Settings app with *everything*. It might remind you a little bit of the Windows Registry, and it *is* similar. However, it is more readable; it only covers GNOME functionality, and some software is built for GNOME.
`dconf Editor` is a GNOME Settings app with *everything*. It might remind you a little bit of the Windows Registry, and it *is* similar. However, it is more readable; it only covers GNOME functionality and some software built for GNOME.

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it covers some software build for GNOME

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Hey @SergeCroise You aren't wrong about how this sentence reads, but I also did not like the semi-colon. I did a quick edit.

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Co-authored-by: Serge Croisé <SergeCroise@users.noreply.github.com>
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Test results for 96b8948:

Number of broken URLs: 2

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
 https://social.linux.pizza/@jahway603,failed,guides/contribute/README.md
 https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps/resf.rockylinux-aarch64,failed,guides/cloud/migration-to-new-azure-images.md

@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit 1ffbb4b into rocky-linux:main Aug 15, 2024
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