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@sspencerwire sspencerwire commented Aug 10, 2022

  • renamed the document to "LXD Server"
  • renamed the 00-toc.md "Introduction"
  • made sure that the privileges needed for each chapter were specified
    at the beginning and made sure they referenced "chapter" instead of
    section
  • removed a duplicated section at the bottom of 01-install.md
  • fixed the top line of the 02-zfs_setup.md to eliminate any mention
    of Rocky Linux versions
  • fixed top line of 03-lxdinit.md so that it removed any reference of
    Rocky Linux versions, specified the privileges needed, and added a
    slightly better assumption line based on the ZFS storage pool.
  • cleaned up 04-firewall.md by adding privileges needed at the top and
    emphasizing the use of firewalld for both Rocky Linux 8.6 and 9.0
  • fixed wording of 05-lxd_images.md at top to be clear about
    privileges needed
  • fixed privileges needed for for 06-profiles.md,
    07-configurations.md, 08-snapshots.md, and 10-automating.md
  • added a mixed-privileges statement at the top of
    09-snapshot_server.md, removed mentions of Rocky Linux versions from
    the firewall sections
  • changed the reference to the Book to "LXD Server" from "LXD Production
    Server" in 30-appendix_a.md

Author checklist (Completed by original Author)

  • Contribution a good fit for the Rocky project? Title and Author MetaTags inserted ?
  • Is this a non-English contribution?
  • If applicable, steps and instructions have been tested to work on a real system
  • Did you perform an initial self-review to fix basic typos and grammatical correctness

Rocky Documentation checklist (Completed by Rocky team)

  • 1st Pass (Check that document is good fit for project and author checklist completed)
  • 2nd Pass (Technical Review - check for technical correctness)
  • 3rd Pass (Basic Editorial Review)
  • 4th Pass (Detailed Editorial Review and Peer Review)
  • Final pass/approval (Final Review)

* renamed the document to "LXD Server"
* renamed the `00-toc.md` "Introduction"
* made sure that the privileges needed for each chapter were specified
at the beginning and made sure they referenced "chapter" instead of
section
* removed a duplicated section at the bottom of `01-install.md`
* fixed the top line of the `02-zfs_setup.md` to eliminate any mention
of Rocky Linux versions
* fixed top line of `03-lxdinit.md` so that it removed any reference of
Rocky Linux versions, specified the privileges needed, and added a
slightly better assumption line based on the ZFS storage pool.
* cleaned up `04-firewall.md` by adding privileges needed at the top and
emphasizing the use of `firewalld` for both Rocky Linux 8.6 and 9.0
* fixed wording of `05-lxd_images.md` at top to be clear about
privileges needed
* fixed privileges needed for for `06-profiles.md`,
`07-configurations.md`, `08-snapshots.md`, and `10-automating.md`
* added a mixed-privileges statement at the top of
`09-snapshot_server.md`, removed mentions of Rocky Linux versions from
the firewall sections
* changed the reference to the Book to "LXD Server" from "LXD Production
Server" in `30-appendix_a.md`
@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit ba1bb27 into rocky-linux:main Aug 10, 2022
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