diff --git a/snippets/en/06C-osFulfillmentByToDoLists/0606-gplFulfillToDoList.tex b/snippets/en/06C-osFulfillmentByToDoLists/0606-gplFulfillToDoList.tex index 9602cdf..e6e3058 100644 --- a/snippets/en/06C-osFulfillmentByToDoLists/0606-gplFulfillToDoList.tex +++ b/snippets/en/06C-osFulfillmentByToDoLists/0606-gplFulfillToDoList.tex @@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ \section{GPL licensed software} % Publish the source code \newcommand{\auxSourceRepository}{Push the source code package into a - repository under your control and make it downloadable via the internet. + repository under your control and make it downloadable via the Internet. Ensure, that this repository is online for at least 3 years after you ceased distributing the software package.} @@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ \section{GPL licensed software} % ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ % Explain where to find the sources -\newcommand{\describeHowToGetSource}{Insert a easy to find description into the +\newcommand{\describeHowToGetSource}{Insert an easy to find description into the distribution package that explains how and where the code can be retrieved.} % ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ @@ -1066,11 +1066,11 @@ \subsection{Discussions and Explanations} source distribution, a complete machine-readable copy of the corresponding source code [\ldots] on a medium customarily used for software interchange}.\citeGPLtwo{ยง3b} The \oslic{} construes the common technique to -download files from the internet as a distribution \emph{on a medium [being +download files from the Internet as a distribution \emph{on a medium [being today] customarily used for software interchange}. Therefore, the \oslic{} requires for all open source use cases that refer to the distribution of binaries (GPL-2.0-C3, GPL-2.0-C7, GPL-2.0-C9, GPL-2.0-CB) to make the corresponding -source code of the library itself accessible via an internet repository under +source code of the library itself accessible via an Internet repository under your own control. \label{Gpl3CondCopyleft}