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@@ -3,7 +3,8 @@ Trail map
> How do I learn Ruby on Rails? Vim? Test-Driven Development?
-[apprentice.io](http://apprentice.io) has forced us to formalize our answers to such questions.
+[apprentice.io](http://apprentice.io) has forced us to formalize our answers to
+such questions.
A few problems make those questions difficult to answer. Individuals:
@@ -11,7 +12,8 @@ A few problems make those questions difficult to answer. Individuals:
* have different learning styles
* change their goals mid-process
-A good metaphor for the learning process is a (hiking, biking, or skiing) trail map. Individuals:
+A good metaphor for the learning process is a (hiking, biking, or skiing) trail
+map. Individuals:
* start in different places
* want to go to different places
@@ -59,12 +61,13 @@ Credits
![thoughtbot](http://thoughtbot.com/images/tm/logo.png)
Trail Map is maintained by [thoughtbot, inc](http://thoughtbot.com/community)
-
-Thank you to all [the contributors](https://github.com/thoughtbot/trail_map/contributors)!
-
The names and logos for thoughtbot are trademarks of thoughtbot, inc.
+Thank you, [contributors](/thoughtbot/trail_map/contributors)!
+
License
-------
-Trail Map is Copyright © 2012 thoughtbot, inc. It is free software, and may be redistributed under the terms specified in the [Creative Commons Attribution License](http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/).
+Trail Map is © 2012 thoughtbot, inc. It is free software and may be
+redistributed under the terms specified in the [Creative Commons Attribution
+License](http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/).

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