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@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ \subsubsection*{Organization}
\section*{Background}
\subsection*{What is Tor?}
- Tor is enables users to use the Internet anonymously. Tor was originally developed by the Navy
+ Tor enables users to use the Internet anonymously. Tor was originally developed by the Navy
and is used by militaries, journalist, law enforcement, activists, and the average internet user
\citep[2]{Tor:web}.
%To ensure a user's privacy and anonymity Tor uses multiple layers of
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ \section*{Background}
\subsection*{Why is Tor important?}
ONI, the OpenNet Initiative, reported that "the Middle East and North Africa is one of the most
- heavily censored regions in the world". It also claimed that it "conducted tests for technical
+ heavily censored regions in the world". ONI says that it "conducted tests for technical
Internet filtering in all of the countries in the Middle East and North Africa between 2008 and
2009. Test results prove that the governments and Internet service providers (ISPs) censor
content deemed politically sensitive; critical of governments, leaders or ruling families;
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ \section*{Research Plan}
and HTTP, to become delayed and in some cases hard to use (\citeauthor[2]{analysis}). This
problem is not new. Major ISPs (Internet Service Providers) have allowed their customers to have
the ability to stream music and browse the web while also accommodating other services like FTP
- and BitTorent. This coexistence is normally achieved by packet shapers. A packet shapers looks
+ and BitTorent. This coexistence is normally achieved by packet shapers. A packet shaper looks
at traffic (usually the source and destination port of the traffic) and gives bandwidth priority
to latency sensitive protocols. This is not possible on the inner nodes of the Tor network due
to the encrypted nature of Tor.

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