From 25afb1ad2831faad2dd0576e2f870d247282a25f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Wendy Reid <wendy.reid@rakuten.com>
Date: Tue, 8 Aug 2023 10:27:05 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] incorporating comments

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 index.html | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 8ab35ec..3be3d5c 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -369,16 +369,17 @@ <h3 id="unacceptablebehavior">
 	  </section>
 	      <section>
 	<h3>Safety versus Comfort</h3>
-        <p>This Code prioritizes the safety of individuals, particularly those in marginalized communities, over the comfort of others. We will prioritize safety in situations such as:</p>
+        <p>This Code prioritizes the safety of individuals, particularly those in marginalized communities, over the comfort of others. For example, the following behaviours are presumed to be acceptable even if they make some participants uncomfortable:</p>
         <ul>
           <li>Reasonable communication of boundaries, such as “leave me alone,”
           “go away,” or “I’m not discussing this with you”.
           </li>
           <li>Communication in a tone you don’t find congenial.
           </li>
-          <li>Criticisms of <a>racist</a>, <a>sexist</a>, <a>cissexist</a>, or otherwise oppressive behavior or assumptions. Similarly, we will not accept claims of "Reverse" -isms, including "reverse racism," "reverse sexism," and "cisphobia".
+          <li>Critising oppressive behaviour or assumptions, such as those that are <a>racist</a>, <a>sexist</a>, or <a>cissexist</a>.
           </li>
- </ul>
+        </ul>
+        <p>Note that claims of perceived "reverse"-isms including "reverse racism," "reverse sexism," and "cisphobia" are not acceptable.</p>
       </section>
     </section>
     <section id="Reporting">