From 013eb80e5529cc952545a88ecaed5a8c7bc3fa44 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andres Uribe Gonzalez <auribe@squareup.com>
Date: Fri, 18 Aug 2023 16:13:08 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Encourage OHTTP to prevent linking schema requests

---
 index.html | 12 +++++++++---
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index f7572c3..6ef70e1 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -1077,15 +1077,21 @@ <h3>Verifier Caching</h3>
             </p>
          </section>
          <section class="informative">
-            <h3>Content Distribution Networks</h3>
+            <h3>Schema Resolution</h3>
             <p>
                The use of content distribution networks by <a>issuers</a> can increase the
                privacy of <a>holders</a> by reducing or eliminating requests for the
-               schemas lists from the <a>issuer</a>. Often, a request for a schema
-               list will be served by an edge device and thus be faster and reduce the load
+               schemas from the <a>issuer</a>. Often, a request for a schema
+               will be served by an edge device and thus be faster and reduce the load
                on the server as well as cloaking <a>verifiers</a> and <a>holders</a>
                from <a>issuers</a>.
             </p>
+           <p>
+             Furthermore, the use of <a href="https://ietf-wg-ohai.github.io/oblivious-http/draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp.html">Oblivious HTTP</a>
+             can prevent linking schema requests made by <a>holders</a>. It is encouraged that implementers allow configuration
+             of an <a href="https://ietf-wg-ohai.github.io/oblivious-http/draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp.html#dfn-relay">Oblivious Relay Resource</a>
+             to be used when doing <a>schema resolution</a>.
+           </p>
          </section>
       </section>
       <section class="informative">

From c0aa40ff288cd54cee6e2eb1671edd7d5e5b5390 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andres Uribe <auribe@tbd.email>
Date: Mon, 21 Aug 2023 13:30:04 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <tthibodeau@openlinksw.com>
---
 index.html | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 6ef70e1..8201ffe 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -1079,8 +1079,8 @@ <h3>Verifier Caching</h3>
          <section class="informative">
             <h3>Schema Resolution</h3>
             <p>
-               The use of content distribution networks by <a>issuers</a> can increase the
-               privacy of <a>holders</a> by reducing or eliminating requests for the
+               <a>Issuers</a> can increase the privacy of <a>holders</a> by using
+               content distribution networks to reduce or eliminate requests for the
                schemas from the <a>issuer</a>. Often, a request for a schema
                will be served by an edge device and thus be faster and reduce the load
                on the server as well as cloaking <a>verifiers</a> and <a>holders</a>
@@ -1088,9 +1088,9 @@ <h3>Schema Resolution</h3>
             </p>
            <p>
              Furthermore, the use of <a href="https://ietf-wg-ohai.github.io/oblivious-http/draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp.html">Oblivious HTTP</a>
-             can prevent linking schema requests made by <a>holders</a>. It is encouraged that implementers allow configuration
+             can prevent linkage of schema requests made by <a>holders</a>. Implementers are encouraged to allow configuration
              of an <a href="https://ietf-wg-ohai.github.io/oblivious-http/draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp.html#dfn-relay">Oblivious Relay Resource</a>
-             to be used when doing <a>schema resolution</a>.
+             for use during <a>schema resolution</a>.
            </p>
          </section>
       </section>

From 6127bc082f86bd6aba12e44d9f88d8173d2ba026 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andres Uribe Gonzalez <auribe@squareup.com>
Date: Mon, 21 Aug 2023 13:34:46 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Feedback.

---
 index.html | 4 ++++
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 8201ffe..3ecbed5 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -1078,6 +1078,10 @@ <h3>Verifier Caching</h3>
          </section>
          <section class="informative">
             <h3>Schema Resolution</h3>
+           <p>
+             <a>Schema resolution</a> is the process of dereferencing a credential schema's identifier in order to fetch a
+             <a>credential schema</a>.
+           </p>
             <p>
                <a>Issuers</a> can increase the privacy of <a>holders</a> by using
                content distribution networks to reduce or eliminate requests for the