From 7b41aac163ab68c481ffe8f031b9205d763b0c99 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alastair Campbell <ac@alastc.com>
Date: Mon, 6 Mar 2023 13:26:29 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update guidelines/terms/21/set-of-web-pages.html

Co-authored-by: Mike Gower <mikegower@gmail.com>
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 guidelines/terms/21/set-of-web-pages.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

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@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
    <aside class="example"><p>Examples include:</p>
       <ul>
       <li>a publication which is split across multiple Web pages, where each page contains one chapter or other significant section of the work. The publication is logically a single contiguous unit, and contains navigation features that enable access to the full set of pages.</li>
-      <li>an e-commerce website showing products is a set of Web pages. When progressing to the checkout process the template changes with the navigation and other elements being removed so the pages in that process are functionally and visually different. The checkout is a separate set of Web pages.</li>
+      <li>an e-commerce website shows products in a set of Web pages that all share the same navigation and identification. However, when progressing to the checkout process, the template changes; the navigation and other elements are removed, so the pages in that process are functionally and visually different. The checkout pages are not part of the set of product pages.</li>
       <li>a blog on a sub-domain (e.g. blog.example.com) which has a different navigation and is authored by a distinct set of people from the pages on the primary domain (example.com).</li>
    </ul></aside>