From ce315196181d9cc1a57212cba447b88355cc173b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: JeffH Date: Mon, 27 Feb 2017 18:28:51 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] improve ceremony dfn, add Angelo to ACKs --- index.bs | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs index 720d0c9b9..02a49128f 100644 --- a/index.bs +++ b/index.bs @@ -244,10 +244,11 @@ The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "S : Ceremony :: The concept of a [=ceremony=] [[Ceremony]] is an extension of the concept of a network protocol, with human nodes alongside - computer nodes and with communication links that include UI, human-to-human communication and transfers of physical objects - that carry data. What is out-of-band to a protocol is in-band to a ceremony. In this specification, Registration, - Authentication, and authorization gesture are ceremonies. - + computer nodes and with communication links that include user interface(s), human-to-human communication, and transfers of + physical objects that carry data. What is out-of-band to a protocol is in-band to a ceremony. In this specification, + Registration and Authentication are ceremonies, and an authorization gesture is often a component of + those [=ceremonies=]. + : Client :: See Conforming User Agent. @@ -2798,7 +2799,7 @@ handled on the server side and do not need support from the API specified here. # Acknowledgements # {#acknowledgements} We thank the following for their contributions to, and thorough review of, this specification: Domenic Denicola, Rahul Ghosh, -Brad Hill, Jing Jin, Anne van Kesteren, Giridhar Mandyam, Axel Nennker, Yaron Sheffer, Mike West, Boris Zbarsky. +Brad Hill, Jing Jin, Angelo Liao, Anne van Kesteren, Giridhar Mandyam, Axel Nennker, Yaron Sheffer, Mike West, Boris Zbarsky. 
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