The beginning could be tightened up. Use the active voice as much as pos... #1

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...sible.

I didn't build the app. Just read the content.

@chasay chasay The beginning could be tightened up. Use the active voice as much as …
…possible.


I didn't build the app. Just read the content.
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Updated the text with given comments.

@waratuman waratuman closed this Apr 14, 2012
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