From ef932b939f156cd08f9beb7a114ba0780b226304 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: max-torch Date: Sat, 2 Oct 2021 18:06:57 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] TRoW Proofread Pass For the campaign The Rise of Wesnoth. For Approval. Minor edits and proofreads. `wmlxgettext` was used so as to ensure all text was reviewed. --- .../scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg | 4 ++-- .../scenarios/04a_The_Swamp_of_Esten.cfg | 4 ++-- .../scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg | 6 +++--- .../scenarios/07_Return_to_Oldwood.cfg | 2 +- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg | 2 +- .../scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg | 6 +++--- .../scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg | 4 ++-- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg | 8 ++++---- .../scenarios/18_A_Spy_in_the_Woods.cfg | 2 +- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg | 4 ++-- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/23_Epilogue.cfg | 2 +- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg | 2 +- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Outcast.cfg | 2 +- data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/utils/trow-nlmsg.cfg | 2 +- 14 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg index e5525e9b2c32..6b83bfda5f54 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ name=start [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "The trouble seems to have finally reached to the heart of the Isle, to the isolated lands of King Eldaric IV." + message= _ "The trouble seems to have finally reached the heart of the Isle, to the isolated lands of King Eldaric IV." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] [message] @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=King Eldaric IV - message= _ "You’re showing initiative, son! I’m proud of you! Yes, you may lead our forces to battle, it is time — but I’ll stay near to keep an eye on you. There is more to this raid than meets the eye, I think." + message= _ "You’re showing initiative, son! I’m proud of you! Yes, you may lead our forces in battle, it is time — but I’ll stay near to keep an eye on you. There is more to this raid than meets the eye, I think." [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/04a_The_Swamp_of_Esten.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/04a_The_Swamp_of_Esten.cfg index 428a2dfa6f91..5ab07605d9a0 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/04a_The_Swamp_of_Esten.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/04a_The_Swamp_of_Esten.cfg @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ [/unit] [message] speaker=Minister Edren - message= _ "Back you vile— Oh, sorry I thought you were undead. When are those goofs in Clearwater Port going to clear the swamp again?" + message= _ "Back you vile— Oh, sorry, I thought you were undead. When are those goofs in Clearwater Port going to clear the swamp again?" [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric @@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ Enter at Your Own Risk!" [message] speaker=Sir Ruddry - message= _ "As far as I know, Sir. We have a large army, and they were pressing all able bodied men and boys into service when I left. That orcish army is huge, but they haven’t met the main body of our forces yet." + message= _ "As far as I know, Sir. We have a large army, and they were pressing all able-bodied men and boys into service when I left. That orcish army is huge, but they haven’t met the main body of our forces yet." [/message] [message] diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg index 7bbbc1876b1a..f602ce9df529 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg @@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ [then] [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "You already have the Fire Ruby." + message= _ "Haldric already has the Ruby of Fire." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] @@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "As you open the chest you see it, the Ruby of Fire. It is the size of an apple, and burns with an internal fire, which is refracted through its faces. You can feel the power flowing from it..." + message= _ "As Haldric opens the chest he sees it, the Ruby of Fire. It is the size of an apple, and burns with an internal fire, which is refracted through its faces. He can feel the power flowing from it..." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ name=victory [message] speaker=Prince Haldric - message= _ "I’m glad that’s over! We have the Ruby of Fire, and that Lich-Lord is now a pile of dust, let’s get out of these catacombs!" + message= _ "I’m glad that’s over! We have the Ruby of Fire, and that Lich-Lord is now a pile of dust. Let’s get out of these catacombs!" [/message] {CLEAR_VARIABLE Have_Ruby} [/event] diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/07_Return_to_Oldwood.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/07_Return_to_Oldwood.cfg index 76a6c20615f2..c12edaa8ff1a 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/07_Return_to_Oldwood.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/07_Return_to_Oldwood.cfg @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric - message= _ "Yes, it was a tough battle, but we prevailed. Now, I’m having a problem. I know not what I should do next." + message= _ "Yes, it was a tough battle, but we prevailed. Now, I have a problem. I know not what I should do next." [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg index b33c741e0c3a..3ae12fd3c9be 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg @@ -918,7 +918,7 @@ name=victory [message] speaker=Prince Haldric - message= _ "We’ve escaped from the orcs before we were trapped by the ice! Now, on to Southbay." + message= _ "We’ve escaped from the orcs before getting trapped by the ice! Now, on to Southbay." [/message] [message] diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg index 6fd882e1dbf5..7110875ca88f 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "Prince Haldric has arrived at Fallen Lich Point, to retrieve the Lich-Lord Caror’s Book of Fire and Darkness, and flee into the sewers of Southbay." + message= _ "Prince Haldric has arrived at Fallen Lich Point, to retrieve Lich-Lord Caror’s Book of Fire and Darkness, and flee into the sewers of Southbay." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] @@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ [/filter] [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "This monolith was erected by me, ― (chipped away), first Mage of the good people of the Green Isle. By its power the Lich-Lord is bound in stone. To end the spell a noble of the line of Kings should utter the following..." + message= _ "This monolith was erected by me, ― (chipped away), first Mage of the good people of the Green Isle. By its power, the Lich-Lord is bound in stone. To end the spell, a noble of the line of Kings should utter the following..." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] @@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ [message] speaker=Prince Haldric - message= _ "The lich is free! Let’s bash him and grab that book. That sounds like a job for you, Lady Jessene!" + message= _ "The lich is free! Let’s bash him and grab that book. This sounds like a job for you, Lady Jessene!" [/message] [message] speaker=Lady Jessene diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg index ead90cb7e392..e7fb1f7996d6 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg @@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=King Addroran IX - message= _ "Hmm. There is wisdom in your words, and my end should be in this place. We can hold out for the rest of the winter here. When the orcs last came it was fall and the harvest was in. We can hunt the great schools of fish that live under the ice. You might even be able to depart in well provisioned ships!" + message= _ "Hmm. There is wisdom in your words, and my end should be in this place. We can hold out for the rest of the winter here. When the orcs last came it was fall and the harvest was in. We can hunt the great schools of fish that live under the ice. You might even be able to depart in well-provisioned ships!" [/message] [message] speaker=Lady Jessene @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=King Addroran IX - message= _ "No. Flee, and flee east. It is my duty to hold this city as long as I can for the sake of all who can be evacuated. That means that it shall fall on Haldric and you to lead the evacuation." + message= _ "No. Flee, and flee east. It is my duty to hold this city as long as I can for the sake of all who can be evacuated. This means that it shall fall on Haldric and you to lead the evacuation." [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg index a9759eeaf988..91f0609b4b6b 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg @@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ #define ISLE [option] - label= _ "Let’s put those souls to rest on the cursed isle!" + label= _ "Let’s put those souls on the cursed isle to rest!" [show_if] [variable] @@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ [then] [message] speaker="Lord El'Isomithir" - message= _ "Long ago a clan of elves on the Isle of Tears fell under the sway of a dark curse. Their souls still haunt that place and no elf will go there. You should clear this isle, and put their souls to rest." + message= _ "Long ago, a clan of elves on the Isle of Tears fell under the sway of a dark curse. Their souls still haunt that place and no elf will go there. You should clear this isle, and put their souls to rest." [/message] [/then] [/if] @@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ value="Isle" [message] speaker="Lord El'Isomithir" - message= _ "Finally the souls of our poor kin may rest. Thank you." + message= _ "Finally, the souls of our poor kin may rest. Thank you." [/message] [/case] [case] @@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=Lord Aryad - message= _ "Well then, human. Each of us lords has a specific quest for you. If you complete them all you will be granted all of the plains in our domain and the hills south of the Great River, if not you will be forced to depart. So which quest do you wish to undertake first?" + message= _ "Well then, human. Each of us lords has a specific quest for you. If you complete them all you will be granted all of the plains in our domain and the hills south of the Great River, if not you will be forced to depart. So, which quest do you wish to undertake first?" [/message] {QUESTS} diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/18_A_Spy_in_the_Woods.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/18_A_Spy_in_the_Woods.cfg index 8d17804a246b..75789f4dc277 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/18_A_Spy_in_the_Woods.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/18_A_Spy_in_the_Woods.cfg @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ [message] speaker=Lord Logalmier - message= _ "So a doom has followed them here from their old home. My Outriders have reported that orcs have made landfall. Orcs! The tree-killers of our most ancient legends. Some thought them only a nightmare to frighten children, and never real at all." + message= _ "So, a doom has followed them here from their old home. My Outriders have reported that orcs have made landfall. Orcs! The tree-killers of our most ancient legends. Some thought them only a nightmare to frighten children, and never real at all." [/message] [message] speaker=Lady Dionli diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg index e8e13a9606a2..d45c2acc22e1 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg @@ -109,11 +109,11 @@ [message] speaker=Lady Jessene - message= _ "So what is your plan?" + message= _ "So, what is your plan?" [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric - message= _ "We’re going to convince Jevyan that we gave the elves the Ruby of Fire to secure our place in this new land. Then if the orcs return, hopefully they’ll go looking for our not-so-loyal elven allies first." + message= _ "We’re going to convince Jevyan that we gave the elves the Ruby of Fire to secure our place in this new land. Then, if the orcs return, hopefully they’ll go looking for our not-so-loyal elven allies first." [/message] [message] speaker=Lady Jessene diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/23_Epilogue.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/23_Epilogue.cfg index 70981d340030..bb9bcec9efc5 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/23_Epilogue.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/23_Epilogue.cfg @@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "It was never said afterwards that the marriage of Haldric and Jessene was exactly tranquil. But it was also said that neither could long stand to be separated from the other, and she bore him strong children that mingled the blood of their diverse ancestries. Many followed their example, and the two refugee peoples from the Green Isles became fused into one in the new kingdom." + message= _ "It was never said afterwards that the marriage of Haldric and Jessene was exactly tranquil. But it was also said that neither could long stand to be separated from the other, and she bore him strong children that mingled the blood of their diverse ancestries. Many followed their example, and the two refugee peoples from the Green Isle became fused into one in the new kingdom." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] [message] diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg index 1f1137b54319..b9991d68e650 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ {AMLA_DEFAULT} cost=60 usage=mixed fighter - description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when a war against Haldric’s people was being lost. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues increasing with time, as does her natural leadership." + description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when a war against Haldric’s people was being lost. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues to increase with time, as does her natural leadership." die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_FEMALE_DIE} [defend] hits=miss diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Outcast.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Outcast.cfg index 173cd11b64d3..a2b60485470e 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Outcast.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Outcast.cfg @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ advances_to=Wesfolk Lady cost=18 usage=mixed fighter - description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when a war against Haldric’s people was being lost. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which she can lend to her people for turning a fight in their favor." + description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when a war against Haldric’s people was being lost. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which she can lend to her people for turning a fight in their favor." die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_FEMALE_DIE} [defend] hits=miss diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/utils/trow-nlmsg.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/utils/trow-nlmsg.cfg index 102af9c7f236..3b9851d29dd0 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/utils/trow-nlmsg.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/utils/trow-nlmsg.cfg @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ [then] [message] speaker=Lady Jessene - message= _ "Haldric, just before we arrived here I got word that the your ‘third of a fleet’ has departed for our old home, the Green Isle." + message= _ "Haldric, just before we arrived here I got word that your ‘third of a fleet’ has departed for our old home, the Green Isle." [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric From a4cd9d4aa7480d4b4e6284b76f8246b3db197c65 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: max-torch Date: Sun, 3 Oct 2021 13:27:47 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] TroW Proofread Pass Second Draft Second Draft of ef932b939f1. --- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg | 2 +- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg | 2 +- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg | 2 +- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg | 2 +- data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg | 2 +- data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg | 2 +- 6 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg index f602ce9df529..c4eda5ee6a9e 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/06_Temple_in_the_Deep.cfg @@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "As Haldric opens the chest he sees it, the Ruby of Fire. It is the size of an apple, and burns with an internal fire, which is refracted through its faces. He can feel the power flowing from it..." + message= _ "As Haldric opens the chest, he sees it — the Ruby of Fire. It is the size of an apple and burns with an internal fire, which is refracted through its faces. He can feel the power flowing from it..." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg index 3ae12fd3c9be..8bf44bd4a659 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/08_Clearwater_Port.cfg @@ -918,7 +918,7 @@ name=victory [message] speaker=Prince Haldric - message= _ "We’ve escaped from the orcs before getting trapped by the ice! Now, on to Southbay." + message= _ "We’ve escaped from the orcs before the winter ice could trap us! Now, on to Southbay." [/message] [message] diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg index 7110875ca88f..3c63a8247d64 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/09_Fallen_Lich_Point.cfg @@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ [/filter] [message] speaker=narrator - message= _ "This monolith was erected by me, ― (chipped away), first Mage of the good people of the Green Isle. By its power, the Lich-Lord is bound in stone. To end the spell, a noble of the line of Kings should utter the following..." + message= _ "This monolith was erected by me, ― (chipped away), First Mage of the good people of the Green Isle. By its power, the Lich-Lord is bound in stone. To end the spell, a noble of the line of kings should utter the following..." image=wesnoth-icon.png [/message] diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg index e7fb1f7996d6..3a85c2ca94a5 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/11_Southbay_in_Winter.cfg @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=King Addroran IX - message= _ "No. Flee, and flee east. It is my duty to hold this city as long as I can for the sake of all who can be evacuated. This means that it shall fall on Haldric and you to lead the evacuation." + message= _ "No. Flee, and flee east. It is my duty to hold this city as long as I can for the sake of all who can be evacuated. That means it shall fall on Haldric and you to lead the evacuation." [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg index 91f0609b4b6b..0ea43a88c7cc 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/16_The_Kalian.cfg @@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=Lord Aryad - message= _ "Well then, human. Each of us lords has a specific quest for you. If you complete them all you will be granted all of the plains in our domain and the hills south of the Great River, if not you will be forced to depart. So, which quest do you wish to undertake first?" + message= _ "Well then, human. Each of us lords has a specific quest for you. If you complete them all you will be granted all of the plains in our domain and the hills south of the Great River; if not you will be forced to depart. So, which quest do you wish to undertake first?" [/message] {QUESTS} diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg index b9991d68e650..60d9800b1d92 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ {AMLA_DEFAULT} cost=60 usage=mixed fighter - description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when a war against Haldric’s people was being lost. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues to increase with time, as does her natural leadership." + description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when they started losing a war against Haldric's people. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues to increase with time, as does her natural leadership." die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_FEMALE_DIE} [defend] hits=miss From 1ee5b511a1d4977aedd77707315cc14fe5293ade Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: max-torch Date: Mon, 4 Oct 2021 12:38:36 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] TRoW Proofread Pass Third Draft In response to concerns in #6143. --- .../The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg | 4 ++-- data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg | 2 +- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg index 6b83bfda5f54..b49b68d461a2 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/01_A_Summer_of_Storms.cfg @@ -153,11 +153,11 @@ [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric - message= _ "Father, I am of age now. May I lead our forces in battle?" + message= _ "Father, I am of age now. May I lead our forces into battle?" [/message] [message] speaker=King Eldaric IV - message= _ "You’re showing initiative, son! I’m proud of you! Yes, you may lead our forces in battle, it is time — but I’ll stay near to keep an eye on you. There is more to this raid than meets the eye, I think." + message= _ "You’re showing initiative, son! I’m proud of you! Yes, you may lead our forces into battle, it is time — but I’ll stay near to keep an eye on you. There is more to this raid than meets the eye, I think." [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg index 60d9800b1d92..657ec692e65f 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/units/Wesfolk_Leader.cfg @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ {AMLA_DEFAULT} cost=60 usage=mixed fighter - description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when they started losing a war against Haldric's people. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues to increase with time, as does her natural leadership." + description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when they started to lose a war against Haldric’s people. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues to increase with time, as does her natural leadership." die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_FEMALE_DIE} [defend] hits=miss From e24f1beaaab05c9837e42a8028f83f365c011a33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: max-torch Date: Tue, 5 Oct 2021 05:11:31 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Update 21_The_Plan.cfg Restoring to original without comma. To satisfy requested change in pull request. --- data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg index d45c2acc22e1..2f7c2dd49cf6 100644 --- a/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg +++ b/data/campaigns/The_Rise_Of_Wesnoth/scenarios/21_The_Plan.cfg @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ [message] speaker=Lady Jessene - message= _ "So, what is your plan?" + message= _ "So what is your plan?" [/message] [message] speaker=Prince Haldric