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Tighten hero text #42

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Tighten hero text #42

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@sarah11918 sarah11918 commented May 23, 2023

Our current text is a bit of a mouthful, so just suggesting something a little tighter!

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Our current text is a bit of a mouthful, so just suggesting something a little tighter!
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Looks good to me! Bonus points for dropping a few kB off the shipped HTML 🚀

@sarah11918 sarah11918 merged commit e7cdcb4 into main May 23, 2023
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