[3.6] Update opt-out usage tracking text.

[timmyc]

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Changes proposed in this Pull Request:

This change seeks to make the opt-out explanation more clear. The suggested changes here were given by the Editorial team. /cc @seb86 could you let us know if this reads better to you?

Closes #23208

How to test the changes in this Pull Request:

1. View the updated text in /wp-admin/admin.php?page=wc-settings&tab=account

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Changelog entry

Fix: Make usage tracking opt-out instructions more clear.

[codecov]

Codecov Report

Merging #23216 into master will increase coverage by 0.01%.
The diff coverage is 100%.

Impacted Files	Coverage Δ	Complexity Δ
...udes/admin/settings/class-wc-settings-accounts.php	94.07% <100%> (ø)	3 <0> (ø)	⬇️
...ncludes/tracks/events/class-wc-orders-tracking.php	0% <0%> (ø)	6% <0%> (+1%)	⬆️
includes/admin/class-wc-admin-setup-wizard.php	18.31% <0%> (+0.06%)	276% <0%> (-1%)	⬇️
includes/wc-template-functions.php	5.48% <0%> (+0.08%)	0% <0%> (ø)	⬇️
includes/class-wc-tax.php	80.94% <0%> (+0.26%)	131% <0%> (ø)	⬇️
includes/wc-core-functions.php	53.57% <0%> (+0.36%)	0% <0%> (ø)	⬇️

[helgatheviking]

Minor change, but I would propose getting rid of "simply" so that it reads"

"To opt-out, leave this box unchecked. We won’t know this store exists and won’t collect any usage data. %s"

[willgorham]

It might be worth clarifying specifically who the 'we' is. e.g. Woocommerce.com? Automattic?

[seb86]

I did mention WooCommerce.com in my rewrite when I posted the issue #23208. Words have power. Use them wisely please. This one mistake could impact WooCommerce. I hate to see that happen.

[psealock]

As suggested in https://wp.me/p2JRYi-402 by @californiakat, this one also alleviates the confusion around who is "we".

Suggested change

	'desc_tip' => sprintf( esc_html__( 'To opt-out, simply leave this box unchecked. We won’t know this store exists and won’t collect any usage data. %s.', 'woocommerce' ), $tracking_info_text ),
	'desc_tip' => sprintf( esc_html__( 'To opt out, leave this box unticked. Your store remains untracked, and no data will be collected. %s.', 'woocommerce' ), $tracking_info_text ),

[timmyc]

Thanks everyone for the feedback on this text. Another round of edits based upon feedback from the PR here, and from some internal comments:

/cc @seb86 @willgorham @helgatheviking @psealock

[seb86]

@timmyc Much better

[psealock]

Thanks everyone, LGTM!

[californiakat]

In my original edit, opt out has no hyphen and that is correct. I didn't commit an error.

opt-out is an adjective or noun, opt out is a verb.