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A round of editorial changes #676
Over Christmas, I tried to do an end-to-end read through and make some editorial improvements. I haven't yet got all the way through, but here's a first bunch.
I don't think there's anything likely to be controversial in here, or viewed as non-editorial. Certainly that wasn't my intent.
The most striking change is probably that I redid the graphics because they were awful. (I can say that because I'm responsible for the ones in the 1.0 spec.) I also added a diagram at the beginning of section 6 which (I hope) clarifies what constitutes a connection.
Comments, etc.most welcome.
I've just discovered that diffs aren't working again. Will fix that later today.