From 6b8942aba56edb20edb3eee0fdf2d66d77ebad99 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Atsushi Shimono <atsushi@himor.in>
Date: Fri, 13 Dec 2019 17:00:44 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 1/5] updated 'revision log' with three items.

---
 index.html | 22 +++++++++++++++++++++-
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index d3dc36c2..eab55c1a 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -24544,8 +24544,28 @@ <h2 id="acknowledgments">
 <section class="appendix" id="revision_log">
   <h2>Revision Log</h2>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">The following changes were made since the previous publication.</p>
+  <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">前回の公開時から以下の変更が行われています。</p>
   <ul>
-    <li id="id692">TBD</li>
+    <li>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Combined and updated 3.3.8 f,g,h into one (3.3.8 f)</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">3.3.8 項目 f,g,h を統合して項目 f 一つとして更新</p>
+      [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/15">Issue</a>, 
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/44">PR</a>]</li>
+    <li>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">English wording fixes</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">英語表現の修正</p>
+      [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/10">Issue</a>, 
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/66">PR</a>;
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/67">Issue</a>, 
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/82">PR</a>;
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/85">Issue</a>, 
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/91">PR</a>]</li>
+    <li>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merging English and Japanese version</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">英語版と日本語版の統合</p>
+      [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/commit/7dcc9274b108ee14cafdc2b5041975cc277725ad">7dcc927</a>;
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/60">Issue</a>, 
+      <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/88">PR</a>]</li>
   </ul>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">A detailed list of changes, including diffs, can be found in the <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github commit log</a>.</p>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">変更点を含む詳細な変更履歴については <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github のコミットログ</a>を参照してください．</p>

From 533c58d97392d14b8b5890e6675f034ca6583f9d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Atsushi Shimono <atsushi@himor.in>
Date: Mon, 16 Dec 2019 13:34:57 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 2/5] fixed missing Japanese text per comment by @xfq

---
 index.html | 5 ++++-
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index eab55c1a..d74ea9c0 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -24542,7 +24542,10 @@ <h2 id="acknowledgments">
 
 
 <section class="appendix" id="revision_log">
-  <h2>Revision Log</h2>
+  <h2>
+  <span its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Revision Log</span>
+  <span its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">変更記録</span>
+  </h2>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">The following changes were made since the previous publication.</p>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">前回の公開時から以下の変更が行われています。</p>
   <ul>

From af8a065e256015a5ce8f6879cceb8b4c5dcdccaf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Atsushi Shimono <atsushi@himor.in>
Date: Wed, 25 Dec 2019 02:05:58 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 3/5] updated revision log per comments

---
 index.html | 13 ++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index d74ea9c0..9b84313b 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -24547,11 +24547,11 @@ <h2>
   <span its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">変更記録</span>
   </h2>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">The following changes were made since the previous publication.</p>
-  <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">前回の公開時から以下の変更が行われています。</p>
+  <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">前回の公開時から以下の変更が行われています．</p>
   <ul>
     <li>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Combined and updated 3.3.8 f,g,h into one (3.3.8 f)</p>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">3.3.8 項目 f,g,h を統合して項目 f 一つとして更新</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merging and simplified <a href="https://w3c.github.io/jlreq/#id237">handling of overhanging ruby text on punctuation marks</a> (former 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja"><a href="https://w3c.github.io/jlreq/#id237">約物にかかるルビ文字の定義</a>を集約し簡単化しました (以前の 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
       [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/15">Issue</a>, 
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/44">PR</a>]</li>
     <li>
@@ -24569,9 +24569,12 @@ <h2>
       [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/commit/7dcc9274b108ee14cafdc2b5041975cc277725ad">7dcc927</a>;
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/60">Issue</a>, 
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/88">PR</a>]</li>
+    <li>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Link targets are assigned to each list item and note, it is possible to point into the document in a more fine-grained way.</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">文書内リンクがリスト要素とノートにつくようになり，文書内の特定の場所を指すリンクが利用できるようになりました．</p>
   </ul>
-  <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">A detailed list of changes, including diffs, can be found in the <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github commit log</a>.</p>
-  <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">変更点を含む詳細な変更履歴については <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github のコミットログ</a>を参照してください．</p>
+  <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Also minor editorial changes to structure and wording were made. A detailed list of changes, including diffs, can be found in the <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github commit log</a>.</p>
+  <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">また細かな構成・表記上の修正を行いました．変更点を含む詳細な変更履歴については <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github のコミットログ</a>を参照してください．</p>
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From 16fe25646573ac2faef6e22835117a55e39bd377 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Atsushi Shimono <atsushi@himor.in>
Date: Wed, 25 Dec 2019 13:01:27 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 4/5] fixed per comments

---
 index.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 9b84313b..0186c2d0 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -24550,8 +24550,8 @@ <h2>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">前回の公開時から以下の変更が行われています．</p>
   <ul>
     <li>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merging and simplified <a href="https://w3c.github.io/jlreq/#id237">handling of overhanging ruby text on punctuation marks</a> (former 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja"><a href="https://w3c.github.io/jlreq/#id237">約物にかかるルビ文字の定義</a>を集約し簡単化しました (以前の 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merged and simplified <a href="#id237">handling of overhanging ruby text on punctuation marks</a> (former 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja"><a href="#id237">約物にかかるルビ文字の定義</a>を集約し簡単化しました (以前の 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
       [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/15">Issue</a>, 
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/44">PR</a>]</li>
     <li>

From a350cfceeb1ed4d8ede2299302e10cea59b006b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Atsushi Shimono <atsushi@himor.in>
Date: Tue, 17 Mar 2020 18:07:30 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 5/5] modified revision log text as suggested by @r12a

---
 index.html | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 0186c2d0..259143c2 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -24550,13 +24550,13 @@ <h2>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">前回の公開時から以下の変更が行われています．</p>
   <ul>
     <li>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merged and simplified <a href="#id237">handling of overhanging ruby text on punctuation marks</a> (former 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja"><a href="#id237">約物にかかるルビ文字の定義</a>を集約し簡単化しました (以前の 3.3.8 f,g,h)</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merged and simplified <a href="#id237">handling of overhanging ruby text on punctuation marks</a> (former 3.3.8 f,g,h).</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja"><a href="#id237">約物にかかるルビ文字の定義</a>を集約し簡単化しました (以前の 3.3.8 f,g,h)．</p>
       [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/15">Issue</a>, 
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/44">PR</a>]</li>
     <li>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">English wording fixes</p>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">英語表現の修正</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">English wording fixed.</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">英語表現の修正．</p>
       [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/10">Issue</a>, 
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/66">PR</a>;
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/67">Issue</a>, 
@@ -24564,16 +24564,16 @@ <h2>
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/85">Issue</a>, 
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/91">PR</a>]</li>
     <li>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merging English and Japanese version</p>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">英語版と日本語版の統合</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Merged English and Japanese documents into a single document, with switches to allow readers to view the text in either language, or both.</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">英語版と日本語版の統合，および言語切替機能の導入．</p>
       [<a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/commit/7dcc9274b108ee14cafdc2b5041975cc277725ad">7dcc927</a>;
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/issues/60">Issue</a>, 
       <a href="https://github.com/w3c/jlreq/pull/88">PR</a>]</li>
     <li>
-      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Link targets are assigned to each list item and note, it is possible to point into the document in a more fine-grained way.</p>
+      <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Link targets were assigned to each list item and note, making it possible to point into the document in a more fine-grained way.</p>
       <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">文書内リンクがリスト要素とノートにつくようになり，文書内の特定の場所を指すリンクが利用できるようになりました．</p>
   </ul>
-  <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Also minor editorial changes to structure and wording were made. A detailed list of changes, including diffs, can be found in the <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github commit log</a>.</p>
+  <p its-locale-filter-list="en" lang="en">Also minor editorial changes were made to structure and wording of the text. A detailed list of changes, including diffs, can be found in the <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github commit log</a>.</p>
   <p its-locale-filter-list="ja" lang="ja">また細かな構成・表記上の修正を行いました．変更点を含む詳細な変更履歴については <a href="https://github.com/w3c/Jlreq/commits/gh-pages">github のコミットログ</a>を参照してください．</p>
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