[docs/announce] slight polish on announcement

- changed some infinitives to participles
- changed description of masak from 'first user' to 'frenetic'
- 'chromatic' with a small 'C' -- trumps beginning of sentence by me

docs/announce/2009-10

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 We want a Perl 6 book. We want it badly enough to write it ourself. So that's
-what we do: write one.
+what we're doing: writing one.
 
 We, that is Patrick Michaud (architect of the Rakudo Perl compiler), Jonathan
 Worthington (prolific contributor to both Rakudo and Parrot), Carl Mäsak
-(probably the first Rakudo user ever, and our number one bug finder) and
-Moritz Lenz (keeper of the Perl 6 test suite, and Perl 6 user and blogger). We
-are also open to contribution from others - already Jonathan Scott Duff has
-written an initial preface for us.
+(frenetic Rakudo user, and our number one bug finder) and Moritz Lenz (keeper
+of the Perl 6 test suite, and Perl 6 user and blogger). We are also open to
+contribution from others - already Jonathan Scott Duff has written an initial
+preface for us.
 
 We don't have a name yet for our book. We want to cover the basics of Perl 6,
 enough to get your feet wet, and enough to make you want to use it. We want it
@@ -15,20 +15,20 @@ that task we leave to Larry Wall and Damian Conway.
 
 Our vision is to present primarily the subset of Perl 6 that Rakudo
 understands, and have printed copies available by the time Rakudo Star is
-released, that is April or May 2010. Chromatic and Allison Randal have kindly
+released, that is April or May 2010. chromatic and Allison Randal have kindly
 offered to published it via Onyx Neon Press.
 
 Until then, monthly releases will be published under a Creative Commons license
 (noncommercial, attribution, share-alike). 
 
-Currently there are four chapters under construction, with the intention to
-write the more introductory chapters later, when we know what we need to
+Currently we have four chapters under construction, and the intention of
+writing the more introductory chapters later, when we know what we need to
 introduce for the later chapters. So far we have
 
  * Multi dispatch
  * Classes and Object
  * Regexes
  * Grammars
 
-Interested? Check out the git repository at http://github.com/perl6/book, and
-join us in irc://freenode.net#perl6book.
+Interested? Check out the git repository at <http://github.com/perl6/book>,
+and join us in irc://freenode.net#perl6book.

docs/announce/2009-10.html

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
-<p>We want a Perl 6 book. We want it badly enough to write it ourself. So that's
-what we do: write one.</p>
+<p>We want a Perl 6 book. We want it badly enough to write it ourself. So
+that's what we're doing: writing one.</p>
 
-<p>We, that is Patrick Michaud (architect of the Rakudo Perl compiler), Jonathan
-Worthington (prolific contributor to both Rakudo and Parrot), Carl Mäsak
-(probably the first Rakudo user ever, and our number one bug finder) and
-Moritz Lenz (keeper of the Perl 6 test suite, and Perl 6 user and blogger). We
-are also open to contribution from others - already Jonathan Scott Duff has
-written an initial preface for us.</p>
+<p>We, that is Patrick Michaud (architect of the Rakudo Perl compiler),
+Jonathan Worthington (prolific contributor to both Rakudo and Parrot), Carl
+Mäsak (frenetic Rakudo user, and our number one bug finder) and Moritz Lenz
+(keeper of the Perl 6 test suite, and Perl 6 user and blogger). We are also
+open to contribution from others - already Jonathan Scott Duff has written an
+initial preface for us.</p>
 
 <p>We don't have a name yet for our book. We want to cover the basics of Perl 6,
 enough to get your feet wet, and enough to make you want to use it. We want it
@@ -15,14 +15,14 @@
 
 <p>Our vision is to present primarily the subset of Perl 6 that Rakudo
 understands, and have printed copies available by the time Rakudo Star is
-released, that is April or May 2010. Chromatic and Allison Randal have kindly
+released, that is April or May 2010. chromatic and Allison Randal have kindly
 offered to published it via Onyx Neon Press.</p>
 
-<p>Until then, monthly releases will be published under a Creative Commons license
-(noncommercial, attribution, share-alike). </p>
+<p>Until then, monthly releases will be published under a Creative Commons
+license (noncommercial, attribution, share-alike). </p>
 
-<p>Currently there are four chapters under construction, with the intention to
-write the more introductory chapters later, when we know what we need to
+<p>Currently we have four chapters under construction, and the intention of
+writing the more introductory chapters later, when we know what we need to
 introduce for the later chapters. So far we have</p>
 
 <ul>
@@ -34,4 +34,4 @@
 
 <p>Interested? Check out
 <a href="http://github.com/perl6/book">the git repository</a>, and
-join us in irc://freenode.net#perl6book.</p>
+join us in <code>irc://freenode.net#perl6book</code>.</p>