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首页草稿效果 #11

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saberma opened this issue Dec 22, 2012 · 5 comments
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首页草稿效果 #11

saberma opened this issue Dec 22, 2012 · 5 comments

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@saberma
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saberma commented Dec 22, 2012

功能还没有进行开发,先做个最简单的首页。

这个图是用 https://www.easel.io 做的,很多对齐、颜色等细节没有微调。
为了让网站风格不突出,重点表示具体活动的内容,整体设计会偏淡。

大家看有没有问题?

草稿如下

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@zhouguangming
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那个button 像豆瓣.

@nightire
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因为目前的IA还很简单,所以主页这样安排挺好的,没什么大问题。个人建议是某些词句还可以斟酌一下。比如:

  1. 活动票里的【活动】既可以当做名词,也可以当做形容词。在这里的准确意思是帮助活动售票,而不是活动的票,所以“卖活动的票”不如“帮活动卖票”表述的准确。
    不过这忽然给了我一个提示,如果票真的是可以“活动的”又会怎样?不过我暂时想不出来可以怎么个“活动”法。如果大家能有好的想法,那这句话可以变成“帮活动卖票,买活动的票”——听着就觉得挺有意思的。
  2. 下面那三段小的文字,建议把所有的“我们”都改成“19屋”(个别处也可写作“19屋开发团队”或“19屋开源社区”之类的)。这样改动的目的是将产品与产品背后的stakeholders进行比较清晰的定义,该强调品牌的时候就强调品牌。

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hardywu commented Dec 23, 2012

用社区的话,更有参与感。

@moshuohua
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同意将“我们”全部更改为“19屋”,更能清晰突出产品,更加品牌化

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saberma commented Dec 25, 2012

#44

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