grammatically incorrect and confusing summary

[artcathcl]

Description

The noted sentence is grammatically incorrect (minor issue), but also is not clear.

Observed

The test says:

OAuth Provider is an identity service uses an existing identity service as a authentication source to create an OAuth Server for authentication and authorization.

Desired

I'm not really sure what it should say, but here's where things are confusing:

1. OAuth Provider is an identity service uses an ... this just doesn't make sense. Maybe just missing words. I think maybe it's trying to say this, but please double check with experts to confirm: The OAuth Provider identity service type is used to create an OAuth Server leveraging an existing identity service (e.g. user store) for authentication and authorization.
2. uses an existing identity service as a authentication source ... a should be an ... but maybe rewriting the whole sentence will fix that anyway :)

Topics

https://opensource.hcltechsw.com/volt-mx-docs/95/docs/documentation/Foundry/voltmx_foundry_user_guide/Content/Identity11_OAuth.html

To Reproduce

NA, this is just a documentation issue.

[kumari-h]

Hi @artcathcl: Who shall be the expert from the engineering team on this technical topic to verify the accuracy of this information?

[kumari-h]

Hi @artcathcl, I've opened this JIRA ticket to address this issue: https://jira01.hclpnp.com/browse/MXOP-10436.
We'll catch up on JIRA.

Thanks!

(cc: @davidsayer57 )

[kumari-h]

Hi @artcathcl, I've planned this task for the Sprint 130 (current sprint). I'll complete & close this task during this sprint.

(@davidsayer57 )

[kumari-h]

Hi @artcathcl, I've re-written the given content & removed the unnecessary words. The update is available at PR: https://github01.hclpnp.com/phoenix-temenos/volt-mx-doc-opnsrc/pull/2472.

Just a little bit, I'll share the preview doc page so you can verify.
JIRA ticket: https://jira01.hclpnp.com/browse/MXOP-10436

(@davidsayer57 )

[kumari-h]

Hi @artcathcl, please see the updated content and feedback at:
https://github01.hclpnp.com/pages/phoenix-temenos/volt-mx-doc-opnsrc/95/docs/documentation/Foundry/voltmx_foundry_user_guide/Content/Identity11_OAuth.html

(@davidsayer57 )