Chapter 2 Errata

[dhurlburtusa]

• Pg 20, last paragraph, first sentence: Shema => Schema.
• Pg 24, second paragraph, second sentence: ...Figures 1.1, 1.2, and 1.4 in and re-draw... => ...Figures 1.1, 1.2, and 1.4 and re-draw.... (I don't think the in is necessary.)
• Pg 25, last paragraph, last sentence: Figure 2.6... => Figure 2.5....
• Pg 28, first bullet list, second bullet point: ...to indicate that a one class... => ...to indicate that one class... (drops the extra article).
• Pg 29, second to last paragraph, last sentence: ...be used help... => ...be used to help... (missing preposition).
• Pg 30, first paragraph, last sentence: We purposely we created... => We purposely created... (drops the extra pronoun).
• Pg32, second paragraph, second sentence: ...construct, subClassOf is used... => ...construct, subClassOf used... (drops the extra verb).
• Pg32, second paragraph, second to last sentence: ...because it not intuitive. => ...because it is not intuitive. (add missing verb).
• Pg 35, first list, second bullet point: Ithas... => It has... (add missing space).
• Pg 36, paragraph starting with "As previously...", fourth sentence, ...these newfangled... => ...these new fangled... (add missing space).
• Pg 37, first IF/THEN section: (2) that is a... => (2) it is a.... (Other ways to fix exist.)
• Pg 42, paragraph starting with "We have already...", third sentence: ...a subclass person, ... =>...a subclass of person, ... (add missing preposition).
• Pg 44, first paragraph, missing Oxford (aka Harvard) comma in list of items. If you don't care about this level of knit pick, then I won't point out anymore regarding the Oxford comma.
• Pg 45, handled in another GH issue.
• Pg 47, handled in another GH issue.
• Pg 48, first paragraph, third sentence: ...can give it name to if... => ...can give it a name too if... (add missing article and fix typo).
• Pg 48, second paragraph, fourth paragraph: ...means that every Person is also a ... => ...means that every Patient is also a ... (I believe Person is suppose to be Patient).
• Pg 49, first bullet list: inconsistent punctuation endings (some with periods and some not).
• Pg 50, first paragraph: ...given class have One important... =>...given class have. One important... (missing punctuation).

If any of these are too knit picky to care about, please let me know and I will not post that class of errata.

BTW, good book so far.

[jtyzzer]

Pg 48, in "...using set intersection and compliment," "compliment" should be "complement."
Pg 49, "...must be a member or," should read "must be a member of."

[uscholdm]

Holy smoly! Have you ever considered being a professional editor? It is useful to keep posting these. I will collect them up and send to the publisher for an updated version.

[dhurlburtusa]

I even left out some where I noticed there were multiple spaces (I only knew that because it was in a bullet list all starting with the same set of words but was didn't align like the other.) I also left out missing Oxford commas because some people don't care about. I personally prefer the Oxford comma because it minimizes ambiguity.