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Finalize PA copy #405

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macfarlandian opened this issue Apr 20, 2021 · 1 comment · Fixed by #456
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Finalize PA copy #405

macfarlandian opened this issue Apr 20, 2021 · 1 comment · Fixed by #456
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What needs to be done? Why does it need to be done?
Includes an introductory blurb for the homepage plus any edits that may be requested internally or externally.

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hobuobi commented May 14, 2021

Drafting final copy here! Summarizing the biggest changes:

  • Added copy for the landing page (largely taken from the PADOC mission statement).
  • Need to investigate the prominence of new admissions -- the current copy presumes that new admissions are a smaller proportion of total admissions.
  • Might want to add some context on why the prison population has grown and shrunk (mandatory minimums, covid, etc)

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