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Comments from Werner Kassens #4

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SergeStinckwich opened this issue Jan 26, 2016 · 0 comments
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Comments from Werner Kassens #4

SergeStinckwich opened this issue Jan 26, 2016 · 0 comments

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p v:Instead I wanted to illustrate how mapping between mathematical
concepts and computer objects.
->incomplete sentence: either "...how mapping...works" or better the final original "Instead I wanted to illustrate mapping between mathematical concepts and computer objects."
p v:Because the intent of the book is showing numerical methods to object-
oriented programmers the code presented in commented in depth.
->incomplete sentence,original: "Because the book's intent is to show numerical methods to object-
oriented programmers, the code presented here is commented in depth."
p vi:First the necessary equation are
introduced with short explanation.
->grammar, original:First the necessary equations are introduced with short explanations.
p vi: Finally, this book intending to be a practical one, ...
->grammar, original:"Finally, because this book is intended to be a practical one,"
p vi:As far as possible each algorithm is presented with such example of use.
->strange, original: As far as possible each algorithm is presented with examples of use.
p vi:Without their open-mindedness this book
would never made it to a publisher.
->"...would never had made it.."
p1: Of course a few new techniques are been invented
->...have been...
p2: In the recent years object-oriented programming — OOP for short — has been
welcomed for its ability to represent objects from the real world - employees,
bank accounts, etc. - inside a computer
->inconsistent use of"—","In the recent years object-oriented programming (OOP) has been
welcomed for its ability to represent objects from the real world (employees,
bank accounts, etc.) inside a computer"
p2:The UML user guides goes...
->...guide...
p2:..before the wide spread...
->...widespread...
p3:Better than an
argumentation, we show how to implement some numerical algorithms selected
among those which we think are most useful for the areas where object-oriented
software is used primarily:
->Providing more than an
argumentation, i show how to implement some numerical algorithms, selected
among those that, in my opinion, are most useful ...

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