gamedevs/blog-2021-10-14

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https://albgei.github.io/gamedevs/blog-2021-10-14.html

[reichert-p]

Hey gamedevs,

it was cool reading your second blog. I think content wise it was very informative and interesting to get a perspective on your decisions.

I believe the readability of your blog could be improved by distributing the text to the bulletpoints of your roles or by making an extra paragraph between the roles and their explanations.

Furthermore your blog could be improved by reworking your capitalization. Nouns like "Post", "State"(both l.1) etc. are not capitalized in English. This occurs throughout the whole article.

Some other spelling mistakes that could be corrected are:

• sofwareversion (second to last line, two words)
• hostete (last line, hosted)
• github (last line, this one should be capitalized Github or even GitHub)
• Desginer (9.th line of last bullet point, designer)

Best regards,
Philipp from Wizards vs. Robots

[inFumumVerti]

Hi Gamedevs team,

We appreciate your second blog post and think that intended project sounds excellent!
It seems that now you only distributed actual working roles, and no management positions within your team. We would like to know who would fill the roles of "test/project manager" and others, as especially such a fast-moving project seem very dependent on those coordination roles.
And we would really appreciate a rough concept of what your soon-to-be-game will entail, and do you have a plan for further distribution (Steam, direct download). We know these questions are hard to answer, but they have to be answered nonetheless.

Best of luck for the further development,
DHBWorld Team