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Update intro #92

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This is the beginning of a Core Docs overhaul which we'll iterate through over the coming cycle. The specific details cut from the original version of this page will be re-integrated into other pages.

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👏 👏 👏

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Just a few comments!

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Designed from the ground-up to solve the complex problems associated with
deploying, running and updating critical software, **Ubuntu Core** makes updates
automatics, reliable, secure and transparent whilst still offering a broad and
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#### Ubuntu Core and Ubuntu

Ubuntu is widely known as the Ubuntu Desktop and Ubuntu Server Linux
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Seems a bit clumsy. Maybe, "The Ubuntu family of distributions is widely known from" or includes or something.

@degville degville merged commit d2fc530 into canonical:master Feb 19, 2020
@degville degville deleted the update-intro branch February 19, 2020 13:13
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