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Document how to migrate from Ingress to Gateway API #25599
Document how to migrate from Ingress to Gateway API #25599
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nvibert
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Signed-off-by: Nico Vibert <nicolas.vibert@isovalent.com>
Signed-off-by: Nico Vibert <nicolas.vibert@isovalent.com>
Signed-off-by: Nico Vibert <nicolas.vibert@isovalent.com>
Signed-off-by: Nico Vibert <nicolas.vibert@isovalent.com>
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LGTM, nice work @nvibert!
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Signed-off-by: Nico Vibert <nicolas.vibert@isovalent.com>
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@nvibert Good start! ✨ This PR needs extensive revision, but you've built some solid bones.
You have a good conversational style, which makes for good speaking/listening but translates poorly into writing. Focus on using clear, plain language.
There are several sections that don't make sense to me as written. Please rewrite them to be abundantly clear. Err on the side of over-explaining: it's easier to edit plain meanings down than it is to guess what you meant.
Use active voice in the present tense.
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Co-authored-by: ZSC <zacharysarah@users.noreply.github.com> Signed-off-by: Nico Vibert <nicolas.vibert@isovalent.com>
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I think I've updated all the fields that needed updating @zacharysarah - thanks for the thorough review! |
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@nvibert 🌟
Marking as Also marking ready-to-merge because docs only and fully reviewed. |
Please pay attention to commit history, this PR introduced 9 small fixup commits that should've been squashed into one. |