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[WS-All Chxx] Proofreading #2466

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pgoyal01 opened this issue May 28, 2021 · 5 comments
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[WS-All Chxx] Proofreading #2466

pgoyal01 opened this issue May 28, 2021 · 5 comments
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Kali Release Name for 1h2021 Proofreading

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@pgoyal01
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RM

  • Ch02 BNG should Broadband Network Gateway (not Border)
  • Ch07: 7.4.3 Platform ‘front-end’ access security DDOS should be DDoS
  • Ch10: 10.3.5 link in TOC
  • Ch10: make Cyborg Project active link rather than have url separately listed
  • All - change "Network Intensive" to "High Performance"

RA1

  • Ch 2 IaaS, PaaS, SaaS: capitalisation error

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  • Ch02: VFNSDK -- should be VNF SDK
@pgoyal01 pgoyal01 added Kali Release Name for 1h2021 Proofreading labels May 28, 2021
@pgoyal01 pgoyal01 added this to the Kali - M4 - Proofreading milestone May 28, 2021
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RM Ch04:

  • 4.2 Capital letter for Cloud Infrastructure
  • Fig 4-3 Network Intensive -> High Performance
  • 4.2.7.2 and 4.2.7.3 Capital letter for Cloud Infrastructure and CNTT to be replaced by Anuket

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jtwill98 commented Jun 3, 2021

**RM - C2 S2.2
Correct the spelling of extended in the text blow.
Text: The list of use cases will be extendd in the future releases.

Add a comma after common in the text below.
Text: The requirements for user plane Local Breakout / Termination are common mandating that Value Added Services (VASs) & Any Gi-LAN applications are locally hosted at the Edge.

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RA1 2.4.2 -- a change had previously been approved and merged but this has reverted to "should not" and needs to be changed back to "may"

inf.acc.03 Acceleration The Architecture should not rely on SR-IOV PCI-Pass through to provide acceleration to VNFs.

@pgoyal01 pgoyal01 moved this from To do to In Progress in RA1 Jun 15, 2021
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RA1 Proofreading corrections completed -- PR #2484

@pgoyal01 pgoyal01 moved this from In Progress to Done in RA1 Jun 15, 2021
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Fixed

RC1 automation moved this from To do to Done Jun 16, 2021
RM automation moved this from To do to Done Jun 16, 2021
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