Small comments by Pedro.

[lgarron]

Email to WRC, August 01, 2013.

• 9b1a, 9b2a and 9b3a
  "Competitions" here could be replaced by "rounds".
• 9f1 and 9f2
  I don't understand the use of the word "measured (...) to the nearest hundreth of a second". I think "measured and" could be removed with no harm to the sense.
• 9f12c
  "Puzzles" should be changed to "cubes", since this event is only for 3x3x3
• 12d1 already makes it clear that the following are moves applied to the upper face. No need to repeat that inside the brackets at 12d1a and 12d1b
• A1
  kinda silly, but the period at the end should maybe be a ":"
• A6a2
  ...releasing the puzzle(s) in his hands...

Will the competitor have more than one puzzle in his hands? I mean, it could happen, but I don't see it happening.

Also
"...before the before the beginning of the solve."

"solve" here should be "attempt", to be consistent with the rest.

(Just found out that I can edit comments...)

• 5b5e
  "supercede" is written with an "s" instead of "c", I believe (as it is in B1)
• B2b is the same as A4b. Since B1 says that the standard procedure applies, B2b is kinda unnecessary.
• E2e1
  we could add a "(DNF)" at the end, for consistency
• F3
  Add "of the attempt" after "Disqualification" and before "(DNF)", for consistency
• H1
  "Standard speed solving procedure (...) as described in Article B"
  But article B describes blindfolded solving procedure. The speed solving procedure is described in article A. Either way is fine for me, but I'd prefer:
  "standard blindfolded solving procedure (...) described in Article B"

[lgarron]

I've made some changes, which should show up above on GitHub. I consider the rest "won't fix":

• 9f1 and 9f2: I'd prefer to leave in the clear statement that the measurement has to include hundredths.
• 9f12c: I'd prefer to keep the Regulations DRY where possible. "Puzzles" hasn't really confused anyone.
  • I note that this is in contrast to E3b, where explicitness is critical, and the 2013 phrase "corresponding to the event" is cumbersome and not completely clear.
• A1: Most uses of the colon are an explicit continuation of a sentence. A1 stands on its own
• A6a2: Stopwatches are common for multi, which involves multiple puzzles.
• B2b: While that may technically be true, BLD procedure differs with regard to inspection/starting the timer/lifting the cover. I prefer to keep it in an explicit order for both sections.