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diff --git a/btexmat/oscBibDataCheckEn.tex b/btexmat/oscBibDataCheckEn.tex
@@ -159,3 +159,8 @@ \section{Testzitat $\backslash$cite in $\backslash$footnote}
 \printnomenclature
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscBibRevAllDe.tex b/btexmat/oscBibRevAllDe.tex
@@ -130,3 +130,8 @@
 \printnomenclature
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscBibRevAllEn.tex b/btexmat/oscBibRevAllEn.tex
@@ -133,3 +133,8 @@
 \printnomenclature
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscBibRevCopiedButNotRead.tex b/btexmat/oscBibRevCopiedButNotRead.tex
@@ -117,3 +117,8 @@
 \printnomenclature
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscBibRevNextAction.tex b/btexmat/oscBibRevNextAction.tex
@@ -119,3 +119,8 @@
 \printnomenclature
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscBibRevResourcesDe.tex b/btexmat/oscBibRevResourcesDe.tex
@@ -117,3 +117,8 @@
 \printnomenclature
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscBibRevResourcesEn.tex b/btexmat/oscBibRevResourcesEn.tex
@@ -115,3 +115,8 @@
 \bibliography{../bibfiles/oscResourcesEn}
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscHyphenationDeInc.tex b/btexmat/oscHyphenationDeInc.tex
@@ -22,4 +22,7 @@
 
 \hyphenation{rein-cke}
 
-
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscHyphenationEnInc.tex b/btexmat/oscHyphenationEnInc.tex
@@ -27,3 +27,8 @@
 \hyphenation{bi-na-ry}
 \hyphenation{Li-cence}
 \hyphenation{li-cence}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscJbibCfgDeInc.tex b/btexmat/oscJbibCfgDeInc.tex
@@ -111,3 +111,8 @@
 \space\bibsnfont{(=~#2}%
 \ifthenelse{\equal{#1}{}}{)}{, [Bd./Nr.]~#1)}%
 }%
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscJbibCfgEnInc.tex b/btexmat/oscJbibCfgEnInc.tex
@@ -117,3 +117,8 @@
 \ifthenelse{\equal{#1}{}}{)}{, [Vol./No.]~#1)}%
 }%
 
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscJbibCfgEnIncNoAnno.tex b/btexmat/oscJbibCfgEnIncNoAnno.tex
@@ -117,3 +117,8 @@
 \ifthenelse{\equal{#1}{}}{)}{, [Vol./No.]~#1)}%
 }%
 
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscJbibCfgPureInc.tex b/btexmat/oscJbibCfgPureInc.tex
@@ -117,3 +117,8 @@
 \ifthenelse{\equal{#1}{}}{)}{, [Vol./No.]~#1)}%
 }%
 
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscLicenseFootnoteInc.tex b/btexmat/oscLicenseFootnoteInc.tex
@@ -35,4 +35,9 @@
 please use the scientific standard.
 \newline
 { \tiny \itshape [derived from myCsrf (= 'mind your Scholar Research Framework') 
-\copyright K. Reincke CC BY 3.0  http://mycsrf.fodina.de/)] }}
+\copyright K. Reincke CC BY 3.0  http://mycsrf.fodina.de/)] }}
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscLicenseHintInc.tex b/btexmat/oscLicenseHintInc.tex
@@ -39,3 +39,7 @@
 {\tiny \itshape [ LaTeX form derived from myCsrf (= 'mind your Scholar Research
 Framework') \copyright K. Reincke CC BY 3.0  http://mycsrf.fodina.de/)] }
 
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscNclAbbreviationsDeInc.tex b/btexmat/oscNclAbbreviationsDeInc.tex
@@ -30,4 +30,9 @@
 \abbr[wp]{wp.}{webpage = Webdokument ohne innere Seitennummerierung}
 \abbr[oa]{o.A.}{ohne Angabe}
 \abbr[ojahr]{o.J.}{Jahr nicht (explizit) angegeben}
-\abbr[oort]{o.O.}{Ort nicht (explizit) angegeben}
+\abbr[oort]{o.O.}{Ort nicht (explizit) angegeben}
+
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscNclAbbreviationsEnInc.tex b/btexmat/oscNclAbbreviationsEnInc.tex
@@ -46,4 +46,9 @@
 \abbr[mpl]{MPL}{Mozilla Public License}
 \abbr[gpl]{GPL}{GNU General Public License}
 \abbr[agpl]{AGPL}{GNU Affero General Public License}
-\abbr[nabbr]{n.abbr.}{no abbreviation (known)}
+\abbr[nabbr]{n.abbr.}{no abbreviation (known)}
+
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diff --git a/btexmat/oscNclJournalsInc.tex b/btexmat/oscNclJournalsInc.tex
@@ -81,3 +81,7 @@
 \abbr[cr]{CR}{Computer und Recht. Zeitschrift für die Praxis des Rechts der
 Informationstechnologien}
 
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diff --git a/oslic.tex b/oslic.tex
@@ -174,6 +174,8 @@
 % second argument is location, like "§2"; must be "wp" if no paragraph is given 
 \newcommand*{\citeAGPL}[2][cf.]{\footcite[#1][\nopage wp #2]{Agpl30OsiLicense2007a}}
 \newcommand*{\citeAPL}[2][cf.]{\footcite[#1][\nopage wp #2]{Apl20OsiLicense2004a}}
+\newcommand*{\citeBSDnew}[2][cf.]{\footcite[#1][\nopage wp #2]{BsdLicense3Clause}}
+\newcommand*{\citeBSDsimple}[2][cf.]{\footcite[#1][\nopage wp #2]{BsdLicense2Clause}}
 \newcommand*{\citeCDDL}[2][cf.]{\footcite[#1][\nopage wp #2]{Cddl10OsiLicense2004a}}
 \newcommand*{\citeEPL}[2][cf.]{\footcite[#1][\nopage wp #2]{Epl10OsiLicense2005a}}
 \newcommand*{\citeEUPL}[2][cf.]{\footcite[#1][\nopage wp #2]{Eupl11OsiLicense2007a}}
@@ -194,8 +196,7 @@
 \nocite{*}
 
 %%-- start(titlepage)
-\titlehead{Version \input{rel-number} % -- \input{rel-date} 
-}
+\titlehead{Version \input{rel-number}}
 
 \subject{\small \itshape A Practical Guide for Developers, Managers, OS Experts, 
 and Companies} 
@@ -337,3 +338,8 @@ \chapter{Appendices}
 \bibliography{bibfiles/oscResourcesEn,bibfiles/oscCopiedButNotRead,bibfiles/oscNextActions}
 
 \end{document}
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diff --git a/snippets/20110905-LitCheckInc.tex b/snippets/20110905-LitCheckInc.tex
@@ -57,3 +57,8 @@ \section{Form [only to demo our lib style. will be replaced]}
 \end{itemize}
 
 %\bibliography{../bibfiles/oscResourcesEn}
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diff --git a/snippets/20110912-TopicTopoi.tex b/snippets/20110912-TopicTopoi.tex
@@ -51,3 +51,8 @@
 
 
 %\bibliography{../bibfiles/oscResourcesEn}
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diff --git a/snippets/en/01C-IntroductionInc.tex b/snippets/en/01C-IntroductionInc.tex
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ \chapter{Introduction}
 
 The third decision our company reached was to allow the \emph{Telekom OSRB} to
 create the compendium in the same mode of cooperation that open source projects
-usually use. Again, a simple reason evoked this ruling: If in the future--as a
+usually use. Again, a simple reason evoked this ruling: If in the future---as a
 rule---not a reviewing OSRB, but a simple manual should assure the open 
 source license compliant behavior of projects, programmers, and managers, this
 book had of course to be particularly reliable. There is a known feature of the
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ \chapter{Introduction}
 \texttt{https://github.com/dtag-dbu/oslic}; get project information by
 \texttt{http://dtag-dbu.github.com/oslic/} or by
 \texttt{http://www.oslic.org/}.}  And it licensed the \oslic{} under Creative
-Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Germany License.\footnote{ This text is
+Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Germany License.\footnote{This text is
 licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Germany License
 (\texttt{http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/de/}): Feel free
 \enquote{to share (to copy, distribute and transmit)} or \enquote{to remix (to
@@ -134,10 +134,11 @@ \chapter{Introduction}
 sponsor \textit{Deutsche Telekom AG} into your preface. For normal citations
 please use the scientific standard.}
 
-But to publish the \emph{\oslic} as a free book has another important connotation --
-at least for the \emph{Telekom OSRB}: It is also intended to be an appreciative
-\emph{giving back} to the \emph{open source community} which has enriched and
-simplified the life of so many employees and companies over so many years.
+But to publish the \emph{\oslic} as a free book has another important
+connotation---at least for the \emph{Telekom OSRB}: It is also intended to be an
+appreciative \emph{giving back} to the \emph{open source community} which has
+enriched and simplified the life of so many employees and companies over so many
+years. 
 
 Altogether, the \oslic{} follows five principles:
 
@@ -158,11 +159,12 @@ \chapter{Introduction}
   as they prefer---but on all accounts without being disturbed by large inline
   comments or frequent page turnings. We know that modern writer guides prefer
   less `noisy' styles (\cite[pars pro toto cf.][\nopage passim]{Mla2009a}). But
-  for a reliable usage---challenged by the often modified internet sources---%
-  these methods are still a little imprecise (for details $\rightarrow$ \oslic,
-  pp.\ \pageref{sec:QuotationAppendix}. For a short motivation of the style used
-  in the \oslic{} \cite[cf.][\nopage passim]{Reincke2012a}. For a more elaborated
-  legitimizing version \cite[cf.][\nopage passim]{Reincke2012b}).}
+  for a reliable usage---challenged by the often modified internet
+  sources---these methods are still a little imprecise (for details
+  $\rightarrow$ \oslic, pp.\ \pageref{sec:QuotationAppendix}. For a short
+  motivation of the style used in the \oslic{} \cite[cf.][\nopage
+  passim]{Reincke2012a}. For a more elaborated legitimizing version
+  \cite[cf.][\nopage passim]{Reincke2012b}).} 
 
   \item[Not clearing the forest, but cutting a swath] The \oslic{} has to deal with
   licenses and their legal aspects, no doubt. But it shall not discuss all

diff --git a/snippets/en/02C-SameIdeaDifferentLicenseModelsInc.tex b/snippets/en/02C-SameIdeaDifferentLicenseModelsInc.tex
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ \chapter{Open Source: The Same Idea, Different Licenses}\label{sec:LicenseTaxono
 license can not be an approved open source license. But in fact, it still is 
 (\cite[cf.][\nopage wp]{OSI2012b}).}
 
-A natural consequence of the clustering into \emph{academic licenses} and 
+Similiar in nature to the clustering into \emph{academic licenses} and 
 \emph{reciprocal licenses} is the grouping into \emph{permissive licenses}, 
 \emph{weak copyleft licenses}, and \emph{strong copyleft licenses}: 
 Even Wikipedia uses the term \enquote{permissive free software licence} in the
@@ -635,15 +635,15 @@ \chapter{Open Source: The Same Idea, Different Licenses}\label{sec:LicenseTaxono
   \multicolumn{2}{|c|}{} &
   \multicolumn{4}{c|}{\scriptsize{\textit{who have already got}}} &
   \multicolumn{3}{c|}{\scriptsize{\textit{who spread open}}} & 
-  distri- &
+  dis- &
   \multicolumn{2}{c|}{unmodified} &
   \multicolumn{2}{c|}{modified} 
   & \\
   \cline{11-14}
   \multicolumn{2}{|c|}{} &
   \multicolumn{4}{c|}{\scriptsize{\textit{sources or binaries}}} &
   \multicolumn{3}{c|}{\scriptsize{\textit{source software}}} & 
-  buted & 
+  \parbox[t]{1cm}{tri\-bu\-ted} & 
  \rotatebox{270}{\footnotesize{sources\ }} &
  \rotatebox{270}{\footnotesize{binaries\ }} &
  \rotatebox{270}{\footnotesize{sources\ }} &
@@ -753,6 +753,10 @@ \chapter{Open Source: The Same Idea, Different Licenses}\label{sec:LicenseTaxono
 \end{minipage}
 \end{table}
 
+\section{\texorpdfstring{The protecting power of the}{The} GNU Affero General Public License (AGPL)}
+\protectionlabel{AGPL}
+
+[TODO...]
 
 \section{\texorpdfstring{The protecting power of the}{The} Apache License (ApL)}
 \protectionlabel{APL}
@@ -1158,12 +1162,6 @@ \subsection{GPL-3.0}
   them make modifications exclusively for you [\ldots]} 
   (\cite[cf.][\nopage wp. §2]{Gpl30OsiLicense2007a}).}
 
-\section{\texorpdfstring{The protecting power of the}{The} GNU Affero General Public License (AGPL)}
-\protectionlabel{AGPL}
-
-[TODO...]
-
-
 \section{\texorpdfstring{The protecting power of the}{The} GNU Lesser General Public License (LGPL)}
 \protectionlabel{LGPL}
 

diff --git a/snippets/en/03C-ImportantMinorPointsInc.tex b/snippets/en/03C-ImportantMinorPointsInc.tex
@@ -23,5 +23,7 @@
 % ----------------
 \chapter{Open Source: About Some Side Effects}\label{sec:SideEffects}
 
-
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diff --git a/snippets/en/03C-osImportantMinorPoints/0301-osAndPatentsInc.tex b/snippets/en/03C-osImportantMinorPoints/0301-osAndPatentsInc.tex
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ \section{The problem of implicitly releasing patents}
 and sometimes these methods are combined:
 
 \begin{itemize}
-  \item An open source license can assure that all contributors to and
+  \item First, an open source license can assure that all contributors to and
   distributors of a piece of open source software grant to all users/%
   recipients not only the right to use the open source software itself, but
   automatically and implicitly also the right to use all those patents 
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ \section{The problem of implicitly releasing patents}
     way for you to use the software legally.} 
   So, let us---a little simplifying and therefore only on the following few
   pages---name such licenses the \emph{granting licenses}.
-  \item An open source license can try to automatically terminate the
+  \item Second, an open source license can try to automatically terminate the
   right to use, to modify, and to distribute the software if its user initiates
   litigations against any of the contributors/distributors with respect to an
   infringement of patent. That can be seen as a revocation of rights granted 
@@ -490,8 +490,8 @@ \subsection{EUPL statements concerning patents}
 Furthermore the EUPL does not contain any patent specific revoking clause, but
 only an abstract clause requiring that all \enquote{[\ldots] the rights granted
 hereunder will terminate automatically upon any breach by the Licensee of the
-terms of the Licence}\citeEUPL{§12}. Thus, the EUPL is -- as we are using to say
-in this chapter -- a granting license but not a revoking license.
+terms of the Licence}\citeEUPL{§12}. Thus, the EUPL is---as we are using to say
+in this chapter---a granting license but not a revoking license.
 
 \subsection{GPL statements concerning patents}
 
@@ -658,3 +658,8 @@ \subsection{MS-PL statements concerning patents}
 patents with respect to the software, then the rights granted to you are revoked. 
 
 % \bibliography{../../../bibfiles/oscResourcesEn}
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