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Mobile FTUE: Copy and final check #6547

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amshakal opened this issue Jul 13, 2022 · 3 comments · Fixed by #6569
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Mobile FTUE: Copy and final check #6547

amshakal opened this issue Jul 13, 2022 · 3 comments · Fixed by #6569
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A-Onboarding T-Enhancement New features, changes in functionality, performance boosts, user-facing improvements Z-FTUE Issue is relevant to the first time use project or experience
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amshakal commented Jul 13, 2022 •
edited by ouchadam

Checklist of copy changes we want to implement on both platforms:

Changes checklist:

  • Splash screen Loop splash carousel swiping #6555

  • Use case screen:

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  • Remove ‘connect to server CTA’

  • Remove full stop from subtitle

  • Create account

  • Choose server

    • Change title copy
    • Change subheading copy
    • Remove copy under server URL

  • Email

    • Change title copy
    • Change subheading copy

  • Phone number

    • Change title copy
    • Change subheading copy

  • Email confirmation

    • Change subheading

  • Policy/T+C

    • Change title copy
    • Change subheading copy

  • Captcha

    • Change icon to robot - Amsha to provide
    • Change title to - are you human?
    • Remove subheading

  • Congratulations

    • Change subheading

  • Display name

    • Remove subheading
    • Show mxid as display name minus server name
    • Keep save and continue enabled

  • Profile picture

    • Change subheading

  • Personalisation complete

    • Change title
    • Change subheading

  • Sign in

    • Change copy for choosing server
    • Remove copy under server
    • Align server name to edit button
    • Add phone as an option

  • Server selection for sign in

Change server to home server

  • Forget password - email

    • Change title
    • Change subheading
    • Remove copy from under the text box

  • Verify email

    • Change title
    • Change subheading
@amshakal amshakal added the Z-FTUE Issue is relevant to the first time use project or experience label Jul 13, 2022
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@ouchadam ouchadam moved this from Incoming to Triaged in Issue triage Jul 14, 2022
@ouchadam ouchadam added T-Enhancement New features, changes in functionality, performance boosts, user-facing improvements A-Onboarding labels Jul 14, 2022
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Updated copy on login screen and email verification

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On the login screen we need to update the server select and remove the "will" as folks' account data already lives on that server.

On the email verification screen - we updated the subhead copy to remove the excess "email"s

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other copy updates included in #6649

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