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Tweak kerning, line-height and spacing #6

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sayanee opened this issue Feb 3, 2017 · 5 comments
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Tweak kerning, line-height and spacing #6

sayanee opened this issue Feb 3, 2017 · 5 comments
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sayanee commented Feb 3, 2017

Line spacing...

... the line-spacing seems a little inconsistent, I know all the lines are of different font sizes but for example, the line "Dip our toes..." seems a bit too tight. "Marvel at the..." seems to be spaced a little too far from "Explore the jungles..." Also, the period after the letters E is kerned a bit too close, while the period after the letter D is a little too far, but only for the large bold red lines.

Spacing...

Poster - there should be a clearer distinction (font wise) between the stanzas. When I read it it's not very clear if the next word is on the next line or if it's truncated into its own column. Maybe can color code the stanzas?

Spacing...

this part where “Ask Questions...” is slightly lower than “That catches…” but have the same font size

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sayanee commented Feb 5, 2017

Shall we try to make all the black words non-bold to make the kerning / spacing consistent? The thickness of the letters seem to differ.

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cheeaun commented Feb 5, 2017

Also, the period after the letters E is kerned a bit too close, while the period after the letter D is a little too far, but only for the large bold red lines.

This is more like the kerning by the font itself, not sure if I'm pro enough to do this kerning stuff when the font author is way better at this than me. 😅

Poster - there should be a clearer distinction (font wise) between the stanzas.

I'll add more consistent spacing between the stanzas. Other manifesto's have the same thing too, without any color code.

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cheeaun commented Feb 5, 2017

@sayanee all the words are not bolded, except the orange ones.

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cheeaun commented Feb 9, 2017

So far already tweaked, do we need to re-send for more feedback?

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sayanee commented Feb 9, 2017

We have received 26/45 feedback with 58% completion. We can close this issue tomorrow.

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