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Graph - English grammar / phrase check required #25

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cbarkerms opened this issue May 25, 2018 · 5 comments
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Graph - English grammar / phrase check required #25

cbarkerms opened this issue May 25, 2018 · 5 comments
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@cbarkerms
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Examples:

MS Graph => either "Graph" or "Microsoft Graph"
"In UWP project go to Helpers/OneDriverHelper.cs" => "In the UWP project go to …"
"Integrating with office" => "Integrating with Office"
"Advance app feature" => "Cortana integration"

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@t-mahigh
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Quite a few examples of this in the first part as well with titles like "Brief explanation of what is Graph" as well as some missing commas in longer sentences.

@skommireddi
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Microsoft Graph has a new future: UserActivity. Is it future or feature?

@michael-hawker
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Microsoft Graph is an API built in Office 365 that allows developers to integrate with devices, Office 365, Azure and develop more intelligent and productive applications.

… Office 365, and Azure and to develop more...

It's a busy sentence though.

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At the core of Microsoft Graph are the concepts of the user and group.

Suggest: There are two primary entities used in the Microsoft Graph, a user and groups.

Then I'd indent/bullet the next two paragraphs to make the user and group explanations stand out (maybe even start with a bolded User and Group).

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Download project form here. Spelling is wrong - from, not form

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