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Feedback for G2C Module 03 #90

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amthomas46 opened this issue Aug 16, 2019 · 1 comment
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Feedback for G2C Module 03 #90

amthomas46 opened this issue Aug 16, 2019 · 1 comment

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@amthomas46
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03 - BDC


I thought the naming for BDC went back to SQL Server 2019 Big Data Clusters? If so, it's in the name of the file and the title of the module.


Spelling/Grammar/Links:

In 3.3 Data Marts section, first sentence has normalized spelled as nomralized

In 3.3 Data Science and Apache Spark ... section, second paragraph first sentence has persisting spelled as presisting

In 3.3 Data Science and Apache Spark ... section, the first paragraph second sentence reads "The first is that the users will involved in the creation of the Features used in various ML and AI algorithms, and are often tasked to Label the data." May want to reword, I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say here, but it reads weird. Maybe "The first is for users involved in the creation of the Features used in various ML and AI algorithms, that are often tasked to label the data." or something?

First sentence of module "in on-premises and in-cloud", remove first "in"?

Delete second paragraph in 03 intro, it's a duplicate.

3.1 sentence paragraph 4 - "Both of these technologies assumes many nodes" assumes to assume

All links work and point correctly.


In 3.1 paragraph 2:

  • "Hadoop" to "Hadoop (HDFS below)"
  • you say "computing nodes that position the workload over distributed data nodes" but the picture doesn't have any compute nodes it has a "NameNode" and also b1 b2, b2 b3, b1 b3 .. I am sure you explain all this but from just a reading perspective I think people (myself included) may be confused here.

In 3.1 paragraph 3:
"Spark is a technology that uses various libraries" to "Spark is a technology that [can be used on top of HDFS] that .." something

I like the updates to the BDC diagram overview!

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Fixed all bugs.

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