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Summary
15 viz. If "Privacy is a human right, inherent to all of us…", then there was no time we didn't possess it.
15 Updated tense agreement.
15 Added missing commas for the embedded clause.
15 Added parentheses (an em dash was preferable, but wouldn't render).
25 Added missing period (to be consistent with the punctuation in the previous H4 (13)).
17 Added missing commas for the embedded clause.
17 Replaced "counter" with "mitigate", since it's more specific.
46 Standardized capitalization (given 42-45)
47 Standardized capitalization (given 42-45).