Writing review of threat-modeling.en.md

[KaiTebay]

Edit: Please ignore my messy commit history (unless it unknowingly affects my pull request)!

Summary

6 "et cetera" --> "etc.", as per APA style.
6 Missing comma: subordinate clause.
8 Missing comma: embedded clause.
10 Missing comma: subordinate clause.
12 "security/privacy" --> "security and privacy", as per APA Style.
12 "potential" is redundant here: "could" expresses modality.
14 Simplified sentence structure: conciseness.
16 Updated to title case.
18 "want to" --> "should", as per style guide.
18 Are "those who might want to get ahold of your assets" not covered by the stressed definition of "adversary"? I couldn't think of a counter-example, so I omitted this for conciseness.
46 Removed "a": conciseness.
46 Missing commas: embedded clause.
46 Removed "at any likelihood": redundancy (already implied).
56 Added "of": accuracy.
56 Missing comma: embedded clause.
68 Partially updated to title case: "Protecting your belongings" reads like a title, whereas "Try it yourself:" is consistent with the tone of the other H3 headings (which are in sentence case).
72 Missing comma: subordinate clause.
82 "roommates/guests" --> "roommates or guests", as per APA Style.
86 "these" --> "those": accuracy.

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[dngray]

Edit: Please ignore my messy commit history (unless it unknowingly affects my pull request)!

Doesn't matter, we can squash them into one before merging, so it's all good.

[blacklight447]

Looks good.

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