Revise OpenWrt card

[JustLuckNoSkill]

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This PR streamlines the OpenWrt card without removing any information.

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[KaiTebay]

Aside from my suggestion, this looks good to me!

[matchboxbananasynergy]

I think it's weird not to start the card with the name of the recommendation, even though it fits our writing style... tough decision here.

[KaiTebay]

I think it's weird not to start the card with the name of the recommendation, even though it fits our writing style... tough decision here.
@matchboxbananasynergy

That's a really good point. How about this: the card could begin with the name of the recommendation while also using active voice!

OpenWrt is a Linux-based operating system; it's primarily used on embedded devices (to route network traffic).

[matchboxbananasynergy]

I think it's weird not to start the card with the name of the recommendation, even though it fits our writing style... tough decision here.
@matchboxbananasynergy

That's a really good point. How about this: the card could begin with the name of the recommendation while also using active voice!

OpenWrt is a Linux-based operating system; it's primarily used on embedded devices (to route network traffic).

@KaiTebay That is much better. Question: does it need the parenthesis for "to route network traffic"?

I feel like "OpenWrt is a Linux-based operating system; it's primarily used on embedded devices to route network traffic." also works and looks much better. Is there some grammatical nuance I'm missing here?

[JustLuckNoSkill]

I feel like "OpenWrt is a Linux-based operating system; it's primarily used on embedded devices to route network traffic." also works and looks much better. Is there some grammatical nuance I'm missing here?

@matchboxbananasynergy This looks good to me.

[KaiTebay]

That is much better. Question: does it need the parenthesis for "to route network traffic"?

I feel like "OpenWrt is a Linux-based operating system; it's primarily used on embedded devices to route network traffic." also works and looks much better. Is there some grammatical nuance I'm missing here?
@matchboxbananasynergy

Not at all: good catch. I did this before my morning coffee. 😅
It looks great to me!

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