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Another wording comment by @martinthomson + remove trailing whitespace
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mirjak committed Aug 6, 2018
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Expand Up @@ -1835,17 +1835,16 @@ instead of dropping it. Endpoints react to congestion by reducing their sending
rate in response, as described in {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}.

To use ECN, QUIC endpoints first determine whether a path supports ECN
marking and the peer is able to access the ECN codepoint in the IP header.
marking and the peer is able to access the ECN codepoint in the IP header.
A network path regarded as not supporting ECN if ECN marked packets get dropped
or ECN marking are rewritten on the path.
An endpoint verifies the path, both during connection establishment
and when migrating to a new path (see {{migration}}).
or ECN marking are rewritten on the path. An endpoint verifies the path, both
during connection establishment and when migrating to a new path (see
{{migration}}).

Each endpoint independently verifies and enables use of ECN by setting the IP
header ECN codepoint to ECN Capable Transport (ECT) for the path from it to the
other peer. Even if ECN is not used on the path to the peer, the endpoint MUST
provide ECN feedback information if the receive of a non-zero ECN IP codepoint
is observed.
other peer. Even if ECN is not used on the path to the peer,the endpoint MUST
provide feedback about ECN markings received (if accessible).

To verify both that a path supports ECN and the peer can provide ECN feedback,
an endpoint MUST set the ECT(0) codepoint in the IP header of all outgoing packets
Expand All @@ -1857,8 +1856,8 @@ Congestion Experienced (CE) codepoint set by a network device that is
experiencing congestion.

On receiving a packet with an ECT or CE codepoint, an endpoint that can access the
IP ECN codepoints increases the corresponding ECT(0), ECT(1), or CE count, and
includes these counters in subsequent (see {{processing-and-ack}}) ACK_ECN frames
IP ECN codepoints increases the corresponding ECT(0), ECT(1), or CE count, and
includes these counters in subsequent (see {{processing-and-ack}}) ACK_ECN frames
(see {{frame-ack-ecn}}).

A packet detected by a receiver as a duplicate does not affect the receiver's
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