Rewraped text in both recovery and transport. Added a new sub-section…

… on continous verification.

draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

@@ -1047,18 +1047,20 @@ acked_packet from sent_packets.
 
 ### On Packets Marked
 
-      Invoked by an increment in the number of CE marked packets, as indicated by a newly received ACK_ECN frame. The variable ack_ce_counter is used to check if packets are recently CE marked.
+Invoked by an increment in the number of CE marked packets, as 
+indicated by a newly received ACK_ECN frame. The variable ack_ce_counter 
+is used to check if packets are recently CE marked. 
 
 ~~~
    OnPacketsMarked(ce_counter):
-      if (end_of_recovery < largest_acked_packet && ce_counter > ack_ce_counter):
+      if (end_of_recovery < largest_acked_packet && ce_counter > ack_ce_cntr):
         // Start a new congestion epoch
         end_of_recovery = largest_sent_packet
         congestion_window *= kMarkReductionFactor
         congestion_window = max(congestion_window, kMinimumWindow)
         ssthresh = congestion_window
-        // update ack_ce_counter
-        ack_ce_counter = ce_counter
+        // update ack_ce_cntr
+        ack_ce_cntr = ce_counter
 ~~~
 
 

draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

@@ -1047,20 +1047,21 @@ negotiation, which is the same no matter which reserved version was sent.
 A server MAY therefore send different reserved version numbers in the Version
 Negotiation Packet and in its transport parameters.
 
-A client MAY send a packet using a reserved version number.  This can be used to
-solicit a list of supported versions from a server.
+A client MAY send a packet using a reserved version number. This can be 
+used to solicit a list of supported versions from a server. 
 
 
 ## Cryptographic and Transport Handshake {#handshake}
 
-QUIC relies on a combined cryptographic and transport handshake to minimize
-connection establishment latency.  QUIC allocates stream 0 for the cryptographic
-handshake.  Version 0x00000001 of QUIC uses TLS 1.3 as described in
-{{QUIC-TLS}}; a different QUIC version number could indicate that a different
-cryptographic handshake protocol is in use.
+QUIC relies on a combined cryptographic and transport handshake to 
+minimize connection establishment latency. QUIC allocates stream 0 for 
+the cryptographic handshake. Version 0x00000001 of QUIC uses TLS 1.3 as 
+described in {{QUIC-TLS}}; a different QUIC version number could 
+indicate that a different cryptographic handshake protocol is in use. 
 
-QUIC provides this stream with reliable, ordered delivery of data.  In return,
-the cryptographic handshake provides QUIC with:
+
+QUIC provides this stream with reliable, ordered delivery of data. In 
+return, the cryptographic handshake provides QUIC with: 
 
 * authenticated key exchange, where
 
@@ -1070,45 +1071,48 @@ the cryptographic handshake provides QUIC with:
 
    * every connection produces distinct and unrelated keys,
 
-   * keying material is usable for packet protection for both 0-RTT and 1-RTT
-     packets, and
+   * keying material is usable for packet protection for both 0-RTT 
+     and 1-RTT packets, and
 
    * 1-RTT keys have forward secrecy
 
 * authenticated values for the transport parameters of the peer (see
   {{transport-parameters}})
 
-* authenticated confirmation of version negotiation (see {{version-validation}})
+* authenticated confirmation of version negotiation 
+  (see {{version-validation}})
 
 * authenticated negotiation of an application protocol (TLS uses ALPN
   {{?RFC7301}} for this purpose)
 
-* for the server, the ability to carry data that provides assurance that the
-  client can receive packets that are addressed with the transport address that
-  is claimed by the client (see {{address-validation}})
+* for the server, the ability to carry data that provides assurance that 
+  the client can receive packets that are addressed with the transport 
+  address that is claimed by the client (see {{address-validation}}) 
+
+The initial cryptographic handshake message MUST be sent in a single 
+packet. Any second attempt that is triggered by address validation MUST 
+also be sent within a single packet. This avoids having to reassemble a 
+message from multiple packets. Reassembling messages requires that a 
+server maintain state prior to establishing a connection, exposing the 
+server to a denial of service risk. 
 
-The initial cryptographic handshake message MUST be sent in a single packet.
-Any second attempt that is triggered by address validation MUST also be sent
-within a single packet.  This avoids having to reassemble a message from
-multiple packets.  Reassembling messages requires that a server maintain state
-prior to establishing a connection, exposing the server to a denial of service
-risk.
 
-The first client packet of the cryptographic handshake protocol MUST fit within
-a 1232 octet QUIC packet payload.  This includes overheads that reduce the space
-available to the cryptographic handshake protocol.
+The first client packet of the cryptographic handshake protocol MUST fit 
+within a 1232 octet QUIC packet payload. This includes overheads that 
+reduce the space available to the cryptographic handshake protocol. 
 
 Details of how TLS is integrated with QUIC is provided in more detail in
 {{QUIC-TLS}}.
 
 
 ## Transport Parameters
 
-During connection establishment, both endpoints make authenticated declarations
-of their transport parameters.  These declarations are made unilaterally by each
-endpoint.  Endpoints are required to comply with the restrictions implied by
-these parameters; the description of each parameter includes rules for its
-handling.
+During connection establishment, both endpoints make authenticated 
+declarations of their transport parameters. These declarations are made 
+unilaterally by each endpoint. Endpoints are required to comply with the 
+restrictions implied by these parameters; the description of each 
+parameter includes rules for its handling. 
+
 
 The format of the transport parameters is the TransportParameters struct from
 {{figure-transport-parameters}}.  This is described using the presentation
@@ -1410,6 +1414,24 @@ If an ACK frame (not the ACK_ECN frame) is used to acknowledge reception of pack
 
 It is expected that QUIC discards duplicate packets early, however if that is not the case **[ED note, have not seen any clear statement in the drafts]**, then it should be verified that the number of ECT marked packets are equal to or larger that the amount of ECT marked packets that have been transmitted.
 
+### Continous Verification of ECN {#ecn-continous-verification}
+
+If the ECN capabiity check was successful and the endpoint continus to
+send ECT marked packets then continous verification is applied. This is 
+detect any cases when ECN field is bleached, i.e. zeroed out by a network
+node, likely as the result of a routing changes since the ECN capability 
+check.
+
+For each ACK_ECN frame that is received the total number of ACKed 
+packets are updated by adding those outstanding packets that was 
+acknolwedged by this ACK_ECN frame. Then the total number of ACKed 
+packets are compared with the sum of the ECN counters. If ACKed packets 
+are larger than the sum some ECN failure has occured and ECN should be 
+disabled. ECN is also disabled in case an ACK frame is received 
+acknowleging any ECT sent packet. 
+
+
+
 ## Proof of Source Address Ownership {#address-validation}
 
 Transport protocols commonly spend a round trip checking that a client owns the