Manuscript ready for further review

[ramess101]

@mrshirts @jpotoff @msoroush

I have finished a long list of revisions to the manuscript.

Please read over any sections that you had concerns about previously. A full review would also be appreciated if possible. Please make sure to get your changes back to me no later than Tuesday evening so that I can address your comments before the Wednesday deadline.

To avoid any issues with GitHub, the current manuscript can be found here:

JCED_FOMMS_manuscript.pdf

Also, I will continue to make revisions to the supporting information. But I will post the SI when it is ready.

Thank you again!