Editorial suggestions from Benjamin Kaduk's IESG evaluation #1
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There were a couple places where we talk about topics (XML namespaces, etc.) in a way that is shared by many EPP documents. On the assumption that there is a conventional phrasing, I picked an arbitrary document as reference (RFC 8807) and attempted to converge with its phrasing (though I did not achieve full convergence with just these changes). Those changes are in separate commits for ease of removal if my assumption proves ill-founded.