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@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ <h3>The Knight-Mozilla <br> Fellows 2011/12</h3>
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              <h2>Fellowships</h2>
-            <p>Our new class of 2012/13 Knight-Mozilla Fellows will be embedded in partner newsrooms around the world to spend a year writing code in collaboration with reporters and newsroom developers. Fellows work in the open by sharing their code and their discoveries on the web, so more people have access to better software and ideas.</p>
+            <p>Our new class of 2012/13 Knight-Mozilla Fellows will be embedded in partner newsrooms around the world to spend a year writing code in collaboration with reporters and newsroom developers. Fellows work in the open by sharing their code and their discoveries on the web, to increase access to better software and ideas.</p>
             <h2>Hackfests</h2>
-            <p>This year we'll be sponsoring or organizing fifteen hackfests to write code that helps to solve real-world journalistic problems. From Africa to America, we're looking for partners to hack the news with us!</p>
+            <p>This year we'll be sponsoring or organizing fifteen hackfests to write code that helps to solve real-world journalistic problems. From Africa to the Americas, we're looking for partners to hack the news with us.</p>
             <h2>Learning Labs</h2>
             <p>Launching this spring, we'll be hosting online seminars, tutorials, and full-fledged classes tuned to offer new skills to both highly-skilled developers and new-to-code journalists&mdash;as well as points in between.</p>
             <h2>Community</h2>
@@ -139,9 +139,8 @@ <h2>About Knight</h2>
 <p>For more, visit <a href="http://www.knightfoundation.org" target="_blank">knightfoundation.org</a> </p>            </div>
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                 <h2>About Mozilla</h2>
-                <p>Mozilla is a global non-profit dedicated to putting you in control of your online experience and shaping the future of the web for the public good. 
-                <p>We do this by creating great software, like the Firefox browser, and building communities, like Mozilla Drumbeat, that build and grow the open web
-<p><a href="https://donate.mozilla.org/page/contribute/join-mozilla?source=misc" target="_blank">Join Mozilla</a>
+                <p>Mozilla is a global non-profit dedicated to putting you in control of your online experience and shaping the future of the web for the public good&mdash;by creating great software and fostering communities that build and grow the open web.
+<p><a href="http://donate.mozilla.org/email">Sign up to hear more</a>, and, if you're willing, please<a href="http://donate.mozilla.org/join"> join Mozilla.</a>
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