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Example Accessibility Statement 1 #28

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vmmiller opened this issue Oct 15, 2018 · 1 comment
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Example Accessibility Statement 1 #28

vmmiller opened this issue Oct 15, 2018 · 1 comment
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vmmiller commented Oct 15, 2018

Minor editorial suggestions:

Paragraph: "Conformance status"

  • Instead of the having the url in the paragraph, suggest to replace it with wording "The Citylights Inc. website" (with the link on the wording).

  • In this paragraph, some caps should be lower case, specifically, "Partially" (straight after the url)

  • the "s" in "that Some parts"

Paragraph "Feedback":

  • Instead of "Write us at", would prefer "Write to us at"

Last sentence:
Perhaps simplify: "We will try to answer your feedback within 2 work days office working days."
to "We will try to answer your feedback within 2 working days."

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nitedog commented Oct 18, 2018

Fixed, many thanks.

@nitedog nitedog closed this as completed Oct 18, 2018
@nitedog nitedog added this to the Editor Draft milestone Dec 6, 2018
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