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Update accounts developer docs #12938

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@setgree setgree commented May 9, 2024

This looks good! I made a few small changes related to readability and reducing word count

This looks good! A few small changes related to readability and reducing word count
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Hey @setgree, thanks for the PR ❤️

Made a comment on your changes to prerequisites section. Other than that, this looks great. Thanks!

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ An Ethereum account is an entity with an ether (ETH) balance that can send trans

## Prerequisites {#prerequisites}

To help you better understand this page, we recommend you first read through our [introduction to Ethereum](/developers/docs/intro-to-ethereum/).
We recommend you first read through our [introduction to Ethereum](/developers/docs/intro-to-ethereum/).
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The phrase "We recommend you first..." is a recurring pattern in our developer documentation within the prerequisites section. If we believe this should be changed, it warrants a separate discussion rather than making isolated changes.

To maintain consistency, I suggest we revert this line.

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We recommend you first read through our [introduction to Ethereum](/developers/docs/intro-to-ethereum/).
To help you better understand this page, we recommend you first read through our [introduction to Ethereum](/developers/docs/intro-to-ethereum/).

@minimalsm minimalsm changed the title Update index.md for accounts page Update accounts developer docs May 28, 2024
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