MDL-59987 analytics: Language string refinements

All credit goes to Helen Foster.

lang/en/moodle.php

@@ -1032,24 +1032,24 @@
 $string['includesitefiles'] = 'Include site files used in this course';
 $string['includeuserfiles'] = 'Include user files';
 $string['increasesections'] = 'Increase the number of sections';
-$string['indicator:accessesafterend'] = 'Course was accessed after the end date';
-$string['indicator:accessesafterend_help'] = 'This indicator reflects if the student accessed the course after the end date of the course.';
-$string['indicator:accessesbeforestart'] = 'Course was accessed before the start date';
-$string['indicator:accessesbeforestart_help'] = 'This indicator reflects if the student accessed the course before the start date of the course';
+$string['indicator:accessesafterend'] = 'Course accessed after end date';
+$string['indicator:accessesafterend_help'] = 'This indicator reflects if the student accessed the course after the course end date.';
+$string['indicator:accessesbeforestart'] = 'Course accessed before start date';
+$string['indicator:accessesbeforestart_help'] = 'This indicator reflects if the student accessed the course before the course start date.';
 $string['indicator:anywrite'] = 'Any write action';
 $string['indicator:anywrite_help'] = 'This indicator represents any write (submit) action taken by the student.';
 $string['indicator:completeduserprofile'] = 'User profile is completed';
 $string['indicator:completeduserprofile_help'] = 'This indicator represents that the student has completed their user profile.';
-$string['indicator:completionenabled'] = 'Course completion enabled';
+$string['indicator:completionenabled'] = 'Completion tracking enabled';
 $string['indicator:completionenabled_help'] = 'This indicator represents that completion tracking has been enabled for this course.';
 $string['indicator:nostudent'] = 'There are no students';
 $string['indicator:nostudent_help'] = 'This indicator reflects that this course has no students.';
 $string['indicator:noteacher'] = 'There are no teachers';
 $string['indicator:noteacher_help'] = 'This indicator reflects that this course has no teachers.';
 $string['indicator:potentialcognitive'] = 'Course potential cognitive depth';
-$string['indicator:potentialcognitive_help'] = 'This indicator is based on the potential cognitive depth that could be reached by a student in this course activities.';
+$string['indicator:potentialcognitive_help'] = 'This indicator is based on the potential cognitive depth that could be reached by a student participating in course activities.';
 $string['indicator:potentialsocial'] = 'Course potential social breadth';
-$string['indicator:potentialsocial_help'] = 'This indicator is based on the potential social breadth that could be reached by the student in this course activities.';
+$string['indicator:potentialsocial_help'] = 'This indicator is based on the potential social breadth that could be reached by the student participating in course activities.';
 $string['indicator:readactions'] = 'Read actions amount';
 $string['indicator:readactions_help'] = 'This indicator represents the number of read (view) actions taken by the student.';
 $string['indicator:userforumstracking'] = 'User is tracking forums';
@@ -1913,7 +1913,7 @@
 $string['target:coursedropout'] = 'Students at risk of dropping out';
 $string['target:coursedropout_help'] = 'This target describes whether the student is considered at risk of dropping out.';
 $string['target:noteachingactivity'] = 'No teaching';
-$string['target:noteachingactivity_help'] = 'This target describes whether courses that start during the following week will have teaching activity.';
+$string['target:noteachingactivity_help'] = 'This target describes whether courses due to start in the coming week will have teaching activity.';
 $string['targetlabelstudentdropoutyes'] = 'Student at risk of dropping out';
 $string['targetlabelstudentdropoutno'] = 'Not at risk';
 $string['targetlabelteachingyes'] = 'Users with teaching capabilities have access to the course';